"Alone"

a poem with a story

from JoeUser Forums
Alone you could stand,
All by yourself,
Or take there hand,
And forget everything else.

The world of love is just a haze,
You keep spinning and spinning,
And only gaze.

With one little kiss,
your spinning again,
Sending you straight into abliss.

Scarring you,
of many fears,
And hoping that,
You shed no tears.

Love has it downs,
But mostly its ups.
So dont take it for granant,
because you cant get enough.


by:~spiffy~
3,615 views 5 replies
Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
The American education system is failing to deliver graduates who understand the simple differences of "your" and "you're," or "there" and "their."

.. Quiet a pour pom
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
umm instead of pom dont you mean poem??? oh and lso i did that poem in less then three minnutes and plus it was at 10 at night and i was tired
Ashes of the Singularity II
Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
oh and also the pour you used is for example: would you pour me a cup of tea? i think you meant poor??
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
oh and also the pour you used is for example: would you pour me a cup of tea? i think you meant poor??


He was messing with you/making fun of your mistakes. His misspellings were intentional.



Mistakes you could fix, were you so inclined:

Alone you could stand,
All by yourself,
Or take there hand,
And forget everything else.

The world of love is just a haze,
You keep spinning and spinning,
And only gaze.

With one little kiss,
your spinning again,
Sending you straight into abliss.

Scarring you,
of many fears,
And hoping that,
You shed no tears.

Love has it downs,
But mostly its ups.
So dont take it for granant,
because you cant get enough.

There's probably more that I didn't catch. Your poem has been posted here for some time now, and I think it's a poor reflection on you that instead of fixing your errors, you chose to waste time lashing out at someone else for noticing those errors.