Red Sunset Ending

April 12, 2004 8:52 PM from

I listen closely and

ignore what is in the air of silence

unheeded warning signs of a darkened day

live for a tomorrow that will not come if I close my eyes to the signs around me

I feel unafraid of threatening mornings, dream of blissful afternoons that bleed into a red sunset ending.

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Reply #1 April 12, 2004 10:21 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Oh! Nicky!

This took my breath away. It's absolutely beautiful.

Reply #2 April 12, 2004 11:59 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I dont really know what to say when i read stuff like that...

BAM!!!

Reply #3 April 13, 2004 12:15 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

beautiful....

Trinitie

Reply #4 April 13, 2004 6:28 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I dont really know what to say when i read stuff like that...

Did you like it? What did it make you feel? Was it kind of awkward to read? Did any particular line do anything for you? You don't have to answer, but here's some questions that might help you answer, if you feel like it.
Muggaz, I know. I find it hard to comment on poetry. I'm not an authority on the subject by any means, but it's nice to know that you took the time to check it out. Sweet.

Trin and Dharma, the same goes for you both, I appreciate the comments.

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