Liberate Yourself!

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Liberate Yourself

from your fears

your pain

your sorrows



Liberate yourself

from that which binds you

your thoughts

your actions

you


Lift yourself high

so high that you can see

the mountain top

to reach for that star

that shines

within
poetry
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
Disperse those darkening clouds,
That shroud your heart and mind.
And from the desolate bottom,
To the skies you must climb.



I just made that up. You inspired me.

Nice poem, I like the ones that aren't all dark and dreary...I've written a lot of those.

~Zoo
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
Disperse those darkening clouds,That shroud your heart and mind.And from the desolate bottom,To the skies you must climb.


I love it! Nice Shaun, I know you're a fab writer! Give us some more. [ps, I had a mad day today and promise to come visit your blog asap!]
Siege of Centauri
Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
I know you're a fab writer! Give us some more.


Hah...I'm a lazy writer. Especially when it comes to schoolwork...but I'm not too shabby if I do say so myself.

~Zoo
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
Lift yourself high
so high that you can see
the mountain top
to reach for that star
that shines
within


I always say that in every work of art there is something special or unique, a new way of seeing something, that makes it stand out - that knocks it out of the park, so to speak. This was that section for me. Great job.

Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
I always say that in every work of art there is something special or unique, a new way of seeing something, that makes it stand out - that knocks it out of the park, so to speak. This was that section for me. Great job.


Great! So glad you appreciated it! Thx Mr. Moskowitz!
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
but I'm not too shabby if I do say so myself.


No you're not (too shabby)! (re-edited for clarity! I suddenly realise my last respond didn't sound like it was a compliment and it was!)