New Fan Fiction

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Hey All,

For those interested in reading some more fiction based on GalCiv I have written a short story based on the game I finished last night. Please read it if you are interested and I would seriously like feedback. Even if you didn't like it I want to know what you didn't like about it. How else does one improve if there is no correction given?

http://www.eddiesworld.net/galciv/failedalliance.html

I hope you enjoy it.

oldgamster
edited to correct the link... still need to figure out the tricks for this site! :)
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Reply #1 from Stardock Forums Top
Great story oldgamster. :HOT:
Reply #2 from Stardock Forums Top
Wow. Getting pretty emotional about the loss of diversity. I remember that’s the way I used to play MOO1. I always built a “zoo” to display the other races - Humans, Alkaris, Mentars, and others (I was usually the Mrrshan ;) ). To lose an alien civilization was to lose the game.

Well that was MOO1. Now with GalCiv I tear through galaxies leaving a path of gruesome carnage and obliteration. :) It’s not that I don’t have a story going on in the back of my mind, it’s just that it’s a tad darker and more sinister. LOL
Star Control: Origins
Reply #3 from Stardock Forums Top
nice one oldgamster...suffused with a aching irony that only proves you have many sleepless nights and missed dinners to come....

;)
Reply #4 from Stardock Forums Top
LOL thanks to each of you. It's a good feeling when someone else enjoys something you have put together...

KitSome of the best stories come from the things you do whether it is a game or real life. I mean look at Dragon Lance. That was the real chronicles of a table top game... If you haven't put your adventures and experiences into a story you should. I tried to register with the site listed for fan fiction but couldn't get my registration through.

Again thanks and it is my pleasure to have pleased you all.

oldgamster