creative sulking for beginners

(aka ... love & laugh at your "incompleteness") ;)

http://www.loserturdmafia.com/

it’s about "self-knowledge", my *fruit loop hole
i’m floating in a chipped soup bowl
i’m staring at the coloured hues
with “there’s a hole inside me” blues

am i to sink into the white ?
or gravitate towards the light ?
to wait and see what evil thing
this empty, tempting void can bring ?

a circle with no start or end ...
a sign i’ll snap before i’ll bend ?
is my self-knowledge fruit loop hole
a metaphor for my lost soul ?

a manic, milky mixed up mess
a floater with no fixed address
adrift amidst a soggy sea
of countless others just like me

if i aim low i fear i’ll drown
if i aim high they’ll munch me down
i’m soft and round and good to eat
and so what if i’m "incomplete" !


(* "fruit loops" are an australian cereal. bright colours, round, hole in the centre. you know the stuff)

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Reply #1 Top
That was very nice Vanessa! You are very talented...

BAM!!!
Reply #2 Top
why thank you, mark ... *curtsies*.
i seem to be getting braver by the minute with all this encouragement. ;)