things you can tell by looking at him

(aka "the man who changed my mind")

http://www.loserturdmafia.com/
from JoeUser Forums
romeo
ain’t wearin’

that armani ... anymore


he ain’t
flaked in some corner;

gulping bourbon. through a straw


he don’t
race thoroughbreds

or read “the financial review”


in fact
i'm sure you think he ain’t

even a patch on YOU !


romeo
don’t have your "type"

of refinement. and class


but romeos’
got long dark hair

and such a gorgeous ass !


romeo
just wouldn't know

what "fashionable” means


but romeo
looks pretty fine

in old t-shirts and jeans


poor old you
don't have a clue ...

if i hear: "julieeeeeeet"....


i'm diving
off this balcony

first fucking chance i get
art
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
bah! more good stuff.    Are you posting verse as you write it, or posting things you've already written?
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
I LOVE it!
Star Control: Origins
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
thankyou, jeremy, dharma and shadesofgrey ... again !. *blushes* ... you have no idea of the boost this is giving me :)

and jeremy, your question is very perceptive. as you have noticed, i'm posting a mix of old and new stuff. :)

mig.
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
sweet! great writing mig!
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
That....was.....great. Or at least it made me feel a lot better about myself.
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
nicky, thankyou ! ... three cheers for the down-to-earth guys of the world from nicky, dharma and mig ... hip, hip, hooray ! ... and two more :)

and suspeckted, if that poem made you feel good about yourself, then you seem to have the required mentality to be a great guy !!!!. oh no !!!!. don't worry ... nicky, dharma and i will keep your secret :)
Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
Mig... just make sure all these foreignors know where you are from babe!!!

Aussies Rule JU!

BAM!!!
Reply #9 from JoeUser Forums Top
well, muggaz, if they didn't know before, they do now ;).

mig XX