Torment Rhyme

January 28, 2007 1:48 PM from

Meter this, but matter that
Bother this, then bother that
Freaking, tweaking, birthing, shrieking
Which beguiling muse begat

Questioning, unquestioning
Wrestling, then nestling
This cursed gift that heaven sent
Hell envies every sweet torment
Which sin is it I must repent
To rid me of this malcontent

That's that. Thou brat.
( ..Broody moody festering, endless impish pestering… )
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poetry

2,495 views 5 replies

Reply #1 January 28, 2007 5:48 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Excellant! What I would write if I was talented enough.

Reply #2 January 29, 2007 12:00 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Excellent!
I tried to write somerthing like this before, see WWW Link
but wasn't as successful as you were.

Thanks for the writing.
Moskowitz

Reply #3 January 29, 2007 3:28 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Thanks Dr. Guy - I guess we both have OCD then. And you are talented!

Thanks for the link Buddah - your stuff always leaves me feeling better than when I started, and with a smile plastered to my face. It's always high praise coming from you!

Reply #4 January 30, 2007 9:27 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I appreciate the effort anyway. What you did tell me makes the imagination run wild, and it does seem sufficient.
Thank you, thank you.

Reply #5 January 30, 2007 8:50 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I too enjoyed this immensely. Loved the title as well.

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