Everyone's Here.

or; song in B minor

from JoeUser Forums
Everyone's here.
Everyone's waiting.
Everyone's longing to get a bite, get a bite.
I stand in fear,
Full of my loathing.
Everyone's aching to get a bite, get a bite . . .

I feel their fetid claws;
They tear, they rip, they scrape;
Eviscerating me -
I'm trapped without escape.

Everyone's here,
Picking and pulling.
Everyone's dying to take a bite, take a bite.
I cry in pain,
Pleading for darkness.
Everyone's begging to take a bite, take a bite . . .

I feel their fetid claws;
They tear, they rip, they scrape;
Eviscerating me -
I'm trapped without escape.

Everyone's here,
Eating me slowly.




© 2007 Braeden Jones
writing
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
Hmm...very nice...disturbing, but still nice.

Now I'm hungry for some strange reason.

~Zoo
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
Now I'm hungry for some strange reason.


It's possible this stemmed from the "eating myself" post the other day . . .
Star Control: Origins
Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
It's possible this stemmed from the "eating myself" post the other day . . .


I was wondering about your cannabilistic inclinations of late. Still, I liked this piece. Have you got any music for it yet?
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
I don't have to be faster than the cannibal chasing us. I only have to be faster than you, sir. Thanks for the poem.  
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
Weird, wild and whacky.
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
Did you see King Kong on HBO tonight or what?! Reminded me of all those critters trying to eat each other and all the people in sight! Ewwww!


Interesting, kind of understand, I think....let's see...too many people wanting too much from you, asking too much....and you not feeling you're up to the full potential...? Or something like that...or I'm wrong!LOL!

A for Effort anyway!