The Pale Yellow

June 15, 2004 11:59 PM from

(A glimpse into my biking psyche I suppose)

Desperation,
For Just some piece of,
Notoriety.

Recognized,
For good or bad,
Just wanting to be,
Recognized,
For better or worse.

Categorized,
At simple angles and,
Intersections.

Why wait for the light to change,
Green,
Just wanting to be pale,
Yellow,
For those few seconds.

Between,
Polarized characteristics,
Personally placed on both sides of the,
Road.

I know why we crossed.

So we could be,
Inbetween,
For those few seconds,
A pale,
Yellow.

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Reply #1 June 15, 2004 11:04 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

For some reason other than the sweetness of "pale yellow" I can see this being some pimpin' little rap lines... or maybe it's just my mood... I don't know. It's good, though.

~Sarah

Reply #2 June 16, 2004 1:10 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

i just adore your metaphors. the way they're interwoven with sharp, neat snatches of reality really appeals to me.

mig XX

Reply #3 June 16, 2004 9:05 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I was hoping I'd see something from you on here today! I agree with the ladies above.

Reply #4 June 17, 2004 3:46 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

wow, thank you all so much...I was definitely jonesin' for some appreciation today (we all are everyday I suppose) and you delivered right on time....unexpectedly. I've had to keep paging through my notebooks for something to put in my blog cause I just haven't really been "feelin' it" lately.

SuspeckTed

Reply #5 June 18, 2004 4:39 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Yo Bro!
Thanks, it's been a perfectly in-between day. I couldn't be more pale-yellow. I applaud you.

J.

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