ms. liberty and the butchered boy

http://www.loserturdmafia.com/


the simple sounds of animals and the simple strokes of hands
the simple things through deepness rings with the cries it understands
so the butchered boy makes his nasty ploy with a masterstroke of twist,
and ms liberty bends to play the flute but can still hold out her fist ....


the only things that slap my face are poetry and you
the only things that matter are the things i cannot do
we’re bad, so mean, the worlds’ unclean. how stupid and naive
just meat and heat like animals despite what we believe


no bridges, walls, or shopping malls, no politics or science
no issue, view, or other you can inflame my defiance
the nice, the good, the understood, we show these to the rest
but nasty scenes and cruel extremes we hide and love the best


the utter trust and melting lust are awful when you’re this
the utter you, face wrenched in two is so hard to resist
meat-cleavered soul, big fucking hole, he’s leaking on my shoes
on purple suede i’d call that shade: “my boy, he’s got the blues”



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Reply #1 Top
Nice piece...dug this line just meat and heat like animals despite what we believe really reduces us to the lowest common denominator.

Anyway, thanks for your thought-out comments Mig, hope I can better repay the favor in the future.

-suspeckTed
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meat-cleavered soul, big fucking hole, he’s leaking on my shoes
on purple suede i’d call that shade: “my boy, he’s got the blues”


A little metaphysical Quentine Tarantino huh? A pop reference within a blood and guts jig, a dance with gunshot victims...well...in this case meat-cleavered souls. You can't go to the emergency ward with that one, difficult to suture, difficult to find.

My dear Mig, are you trying to imply that behind our petty human lies, some animal truth exists, that we're dirty-clean, violent-zen. I think I'm way off, but i so desperately want to understand

Marco XX
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some animal truth exists, that we're dirty-clean, violent-zen.

Yin and Yang, baby.  Can't have one without the other

We're just animals.....really smart animals...but animals none the less.

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Reply By: Suspeckted Nice piece...dug this line just meat and heat like animals despite what we believe ... really reduces us to the lowest common denominator.We're just animals.....really smart animals...but animals none the less


exactly as you say, karma, we may walk and talk, but we are just animals that are subject to the laws of nature like any other animal ...


thanks for your comments

mig XX

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blah ! it ate half of my comment !


marco, i did say that you were spot on !

and i highlighted karmas' funky little quote about animals.

and i did something and it all went weird.

thanks again ! sorry

mig XX
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You probably accidentally deleted one of the /quote ends, so it gooped it all up.
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Reply #6 By: KarmaGirl - 6/23/2004 10:43:27 AM
You probably accidentally deleted one of the /quote ends, so it gooped it all up.


thanks, karma

i am so tired, it's a wonder i got it done at all. but i think that is exactly what i did. then i looked at it to edit it and went "nah, what a mess, i'll post a new one" hehe !

mig XX
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Reply By: little_whipYou continue to impress me, mig.....good stuff!


i'm getting braver, little_whip !. thanks for your encouragement

mig XX

Reply #9 Top
sabrina, tell your hubby that i think my work pales in comparison to his descriptions of you ..."a flower that opens only in darkness" ... but that i am so inspired by his work that his praise is very valuable to me. (as is yours).

thankyou so much for bringing your amazing spirit to ju.


mig XX