With The Windows Closed....Asleep.

When I woke up
I said I was happy to wake up
next to you,
truth is,
we are happy to wake up next to,

next,

next,

next time we wake up
it will be with the next.

When the whole tower collapsed
you said it was the wind
blowing through your hair,
truth is,
I am the wind blowing through,

blowing,

blowing,

blowing any chance
of seeing this through.

When we're under construction
we'll say we're happy for early mornings
and light breezes,
truth is,
with the windows closed we're still sleeping,

sleeping,

sleeping,

asleep.
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Reply #1 Top


wistful and beautiful, suspeckted. as always, i enjoyed this a great deal.

mig XXX
Reply #2 Top

absolutely fabulous. There is no specific thing I can point to that made me react this way to your writing.... everything was goddamned perfect.