To the Capt.

Poetry inspired by my best friend...

Even now the moments pass us by,
And standing still is not enough
To maintain this lie.

And all I want is all I am,
Nothing more and,
nothing less with nothing holding me back.

And so I cry and smile for you
Since your lack of understanding makes you
young and full of half-truthes.

Do I cry for you?
You know I do.
But you still can fly,
and I have lost my wings to give others life.

And what if I figured out what I want,
and it isn't you?

Do you cry for me?
I do.

Peace,

Beebes
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Reply #1 Top
Awesome poem Alex!!

~carebear~
Reply #2 Top
Thanks Ash.

This is written from Brandon's perspective, I think, and there is a part of it in there about you...

See if you can find it.

Peace,

Beebes
Reply #3 Top
Well as you know, I'm not that bright, so yeah I'm not seeing it. You might want to tell me. But I'll just ask you next period since it's lunch then. So....yeah.

~carebear~
Reply #4 Top
And what if I figured out what I want, and it isn't you?


That part. Not being mean, it's just that's what I get from him when we talk about you.

Peace,

Beebes
Reply #5 Top
Hmm....nice, I can see Brandon like that......very good,

~Zoo
Reply #6 Top
Thanks dude. Sorry, I don't think I'll be writting any poems about you anytime soon but thanks anyways Al.

Capt. over and out!
Reply #7 Top
That part. Not being mean, it's just that's what I get from him when we talk about you.


I was kind of thinking it might have had something to do with that part. But I wasn't sure. But yeah, i see what you're saying. And no offense taken. So....you guys talk about me.....lol

~carebear~
Reply #8 Top

lovely stuff beebes .


mig XX

Reply #9 Top
Ash we talk about everyone... mwahahaha!

Capt. over and out!