A House of Glass

A JUWC Challenge

He always wanted a house of glass,

A fancy one on the beach,

But he wasn't from the upper class,

So he figured it was out of reach.

 

Karma made him win the Lotto,

Thankfully he's a Buddhist.

Bought the house so now he can model,

Yes, he's also a nudist.

 

His need for people to see him nude,

Is like a drug for a junkie,

He doesn't think it's a bit crude,

For folks to see his monkey.

 

It's why he got this see-through abode,

He loves to show off his ass,

Now would someone be as bold,

To please walk on pass.

 

 

 

 

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I was going to do a story but since I'm still working on it (read: I haven't started on it) I decided to try a poem.

I need to get outta first gear here and get to writing a story.

 

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:LOL:

This was great and most creative way in using monkey! :CONGRAT:

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Haha! Ah, nudity always makes for interesting writing. :D

~Zoo
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:LOL:  Nudity, ass and monkeys all in the same poem.  Cool :)

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I really like it.  UDIG? hahaha

I love being surprised while reading, and this was fresh and well done.

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Nudity, ass and monkeys all in the same poem. Cool
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Cool, I agree. Sounds like the making's of a great weekend.  :p  Very creative UDig, I can't wait to read the story!
Reply #7 Top

I laughed out loud.  Well done.

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Kelly,
This was great and most creative way in using monkey!
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Thanks, I wanted the bonus points. ;) 

Zoo,
Haha! Ah, nudity always makes for interesting writing.
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Ain't that the truth? Makes for interesting pics, too.  :p 


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Mark,
Nudity, ass and monkeys all in the same poem. Cool
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Thanks, mate. Sounds like this one bachelor party I intended once.  :D 

Tova,
I really like it. UDIG? hahaha
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Hey you said my name right. I do dig that.  :) 

I love being surprised while reading, and this was fresh and well done.
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Thanks so much.



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Roy,
Very creative UDig, I can't wait to read the story!
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Thank you. Hopefully I'll get the story in here later today.

Dev,
I laughed out loud. Well done.
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Thanks, Peter. I'm glad you enjoyed it.