The Trials of Love

Just a little something...

Well, I'm trying my hand at some poetry again and I decided to use a current conflict happening around me between two of my friends and their strife for some understanding with a certain individual. This goes out to Sam and Alex....just a little something I cooked up....Hope you guys like it....I know its not the greatest(probably because it's 3:15 in the morning) but try to suffer through it :D

The Trials of Love

Foiled are the plans that are lain.
How can there be so much pain?
I thought love was the essence of the heart,
But why would a person try to tear it apart.

How can people deny something so pure?
They try to slice through the joy with a sharped skewer.
A wall of cold steel tries to sever the ties,
Of two meant for each other but oblivious to certain eyes.

The trials of love test your will,
Do not fear, you have the strength and skill,
To turn angry minds bent on undoing,
And to dispel negative emotions that are unmoving.

Someday, together you will be,
Happiness and love shall then bless thee.
The times are tough and are hell for you,
Trust in yourselves and one day, you will get through.
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Reply #2 Top
Well, thanks....I try...

~Zoo
Reply #4 Top
I think it's good Shaun.

Thanks.

Alex
Reply #5 Top
that was really cool man, do another.

Capt. over and out!
Reply #6 Top
That was awesome dude! I agree, do another!

~carebear~
Reply #7 Top
Yes....feed my ego....mmmm....sweet positive reinforcement.....

I'll try to whip up another here in a few days....I'm a slacker you know,
~Zoo
Reply #8 Top
lol, you reminded me of Homer just now.

Poem muy bueno, senor.
Reply #9 Top
Gracias, mi amigo...

~Zoo
Reply #10 Top
What if we have nothing but poo to feed it? Perhaps some w00t would help?

~carebear~
Reply #11 Top
Oh, will you quit bringing stuff up like that on my blogs....jeeze....

~Zoo
Reply #12 Top
great poem... and its so sad to look back on it now and think that people saw a forever-lasting relationship.
(chokes up, and starts to cry scilently....)
Liv