The Trial

October 25, 2004 7:46 PM from

Life
Growing, glowing, flowing
breathing and being
Basking in the joy
a new child is born
Entering into our care
The life we give
pales
next to the life we receive
As new bonds of family
form

art

1,448 views 5 replies

Reply #1 October 25, 2004 8:38 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Score an Insightful! I like this very much. Especially the 'life we give pales to the life we receive'. I love that. Thanks for sharing this!

Reply #2 October 25, 2004 8:46 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Chip--Thanks so much. I haven't written poetry in years, but had a couple thoughts bouncing around, so I thought I would try to pen them and see how they turn out. I appreciate you stopping by and commenting.

Reply #3 October 27, 2004 1:10 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I'll agree with chip, that's a very nice thought.

Reply #4 October 27, 2004 10:04 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Thanks citahellion. I appreciate that.

Reply #5 May 15, 2006 9:06 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Wow. That was really good, bro. That almost is enough to make me want to have kids already!

Give me a couple more years, though . . .

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