Big Fat Raindrops

Your Only Dreaming

October 28, 2004 6:22 PM from

Big fat raindrops
Fall beneath the starline
Tracing your sillhouette
In the moonshine
Up, Up above
I see a star fall
Reminding me of a time
That I felt alone

I can't seem to make sense
Of this coincidence
Falling to that
Soaking ground
Below

The sky
I've never seen it so red
Dancing astral projection
Throughout my head
Take my hand, Lead the way
I feel afraid
Up above to the clouds
dancing masquerades

I can't seem to make sense
Of this coincidence
Falling to that
Soaking ground
Below

art

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Reply #1 November 1, 2004 11:49 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Dig this rat,
you may want to try and hook up with Anti-prose here. It's the group site for all poetry, that way your poems get posted here and on Anti-Prose when you post so other poets who visit Anti-Prose see them everytime you select the "art" category. You can find the link at my blog.

Peace,
And glad I got a chance to see yo' ass on Saturday,
Suspeckted

Reply #2 November 1, 2004 7:52 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Big fat raindrops
Fall beneath the starline
Tracing your sillhouette
In the moonshine

I especially like this part.

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