A Haiku....In Hindsight of an Accident...

A minor one..

November 4, 2004 8:21 PM from

Screech, the car skids and rolls
Boom, blackout, Ouch, where am I?
Climb, slide, ah, I'm free

One of my friends was in a minor little car accident....he's fine though and this is the haiku representing it....I've got some weird thing with haikus right now...I guess because they're so easy to write...

Well, short,sweet and to the point....

I'm out,
~Zoo

poetry

3,884 views 9 replies

Reply #1 November 4, 2004 8:32 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

F.Y.I. The word is hindsight. Postsight is not a true word in Websters. but it does get the meaning across.

IG

Reply #2 November 4, 2004 8:44 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Poetic license,
Postsight would be allowed, but,
Not in the title.

Reply #3 November 4, 2004 8:46 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Eh, Bush can make up words....so can I....

...(I'm an ass...lol)

Ok...let's try Hindsight then....

~Zoo

Reply #4 November 4, 2004 8:57 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Yes, but make us laugh,
With made up words as silly,
As strategery.

Reply #5 November 4, 2004 9:00 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

nice Shaun

Sam

Reply #6 November 4, 2004 9:42 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Uh.... yeah.

Peace,

Beebes

Reply #7 November 4, 2004 11:16 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Yeah, nice one Shaun!

~carebear~

Reply #8 November 5, 2004 1:30 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Neat poem, funny comments . . . great post, Zoo!

Reply #9 November 5, 2004 4:18 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Nice Zoo since everybody is doin that

And i am glad Jeffers is ok

stacey

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