New Demigods (Steampunk)

Okay, so most of you guys didn't really like my last idea, and looking back you were right, but I was tired at the time, so I figured I'd come up with something a little more fitting. ( the reason I suggested the robots last time (and this time) is because the only thing I'm more obssesed with than Demigod is robotics)

Okay, I haven't really thought up much in the way of skills, but I've got a good story:

He was the only one of them who wasn't chosen to be there, but had forced his way in. While the others were chosen by the gods, he was forced to break the dimensional barrier to get through, to join the competetion for the all fathers throne.

He had come from a planet far more advanced than the others, and he was the most inteligent of his species, having converted half his body to technology, but this was never enough for him. what he wanted was to be a god.

While he was studying the skies one night, he saw a dimensional anomally, and through that he was able to see the fighting, and learn of the all-fathers demise. At last, his dream could be achieved! but not without a large amount of effort.

When he finally managed to break through that wall, it had destroyed almost all of the tech that he had enfused with his body, with only the metal skelton left where his powerful limbs once were, and the only weapon to survive was his most powerful, but his most draining, and without his old power core he would be unable to use it.

he set about rebuilding himself, but with the limited technology there, he was forced to build big and simple, using steam and clockwork to power his now massive form, which was built in order to take on what he thougth to be the biggest threat, the Rook. he had mounted his ultimate weapon in his right hand, however he still did not have enough energy to power it, and so built a device that could drain the life energy from the fallen. he had mounted specially designed autmatic crossbows on his shoulders, and a giant claw on his lef hand, the entire body being controlled from deep within, linked to the now completely delimbed, and dehumanised, being that had begun this, just waiting to begin the fight and rise to godhood.

so yeah, that's about it, his lie energy draining device could replenish his MP, and i figured that to use his ultimate weapon he'd have to, obviously, unlock it as an ability, then, instead of using it like others by draining MP, upon it's use a bar could come up,  which would be filled in place of the mp normally aquired by the life draining mahine, and when it's filled then you could unleash it on any target you wanted.

so anyhow, a little mor fitting than the cybers, but it still encapsulates my love of robotics.

(sorry if the story was a bit long )