Solomon, the Wanderer

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characteristics: a wise and peaceful monk/priest not unlike the shaolin in apperance, but he is african decendant and his robes is pure ivory white. Watching over behind his back is a colossal metal halo. The mysterious artifact leviatate independantly in absence of any obvious power source.

edit: Solomon is a crowd control demigod. I think this should be clear by now...

Strengths

+ summon minion

+ teleportation

Weaknesses

-Lack damaging skills

 

STORY

It was the midnight, and Solomon, a pascifist of wisdom  was under trial. Even his frail, aging body didn't sway the hearts of the crowds above. Solomon was stranded into a desolate arena, facing towards him on the other end was a structure almost as old as the gods themselves.

 "Soon the beasts of war will consume you without fail, putting an end of your evil deeds" was the announcement. Everyone on stage cheered menancingly without guilt or thought.

..All lies!

He knew......he knew that his influences have created many enemies, and his days are limited. As the portal was brought to life, all he could remember was the regretful cries of an innocent soul, hanging in a cage beside him. Solomon then proceed to do what he always has done when the whole world is against him, he listened to his soul...........

Even when he felt his body is dissolving in the midst of the carnage, Solomon kept his mind strong, waiting for peace to come. And when it did arrive..... it changes everything!

The crowd suddenly fell silent, as they witness a man emerging from the portal. His youth was somehow restored and now accompanied by a metal halo of monolithic presence.

Slowly he raised one arm, focusing on his new-founded self and power.

They ran. He pulled. No one was spared.

When the poor boy finally have the courage to ask: "what's on the other side, master?" Solomon claim that he ventured to the ends of the world, where he meet Chaos itself. He realize that they're not so different after all; both wanted universal balance that long being overshadowed by desires. These portals were once no more than diplomatic 'tools' to settle grudges between royal families, in glatorial matches where no lives would be lost. But desires eventually corrupt even the heavens above.

Knowing this, Solomon embark on an endless journey, to find the 'one'. To curb the foolishness of all kinds, he must play by their rules. He must find worthy candidates to fill this void left by the Father, even with himself.

"If mortals and gods choose to see the light through darkness, then so be it!

update: i've included a new skill, but  still unsure which  existing skill to replace. thanks!

[True Fist---Solomon execute an uninterruptible attack. deals 500 dmg, ignoring armour]

Skills

1)Pull--- Solomon manipulates gravity against enemy units including demigods, pulling them closer to his side. An interrupt skill and able to target multiple demigods as its area effect increase further away from him like a vortex/cone. No damage dealt. Addtional level increase distance targeted units are pulled towards Solomon

2)Soul Mantra(ultimate)---He summons an ally demigod to his side. Essentially a teleportation skill with a  2-second warning animation on targeted unit. cost around 700 mana and large affect radius

-->summoned demigod debuff of any negative effect

3)Portal---- summons an instant portal which summon random minions for 5,10,15 seconds. all minions summon this way will disappear when skill expire. Additional level increase minion stats. There is a probability which minions will be summon. Minatour will be most common, and priests are rarest.

-->when hp is low significantly increase chance of summoning priests with this skill

4)Medium(passive)---Allied demigods able to utilise Solomon like a teleport scroll. Same effect applies

-->enemy demigod can't teleport away when near Solomon

5) Purity(passive)----Solomon negate the passive skills of any nearby enemy demigods. small area affect around user

--> increase auto attack speed and power

6)Charity Heart(passive)---- Reduce idol costs. additional level lower cost further and bestow nearby ally priests small area damage 

7)High spirit(passive)----increase spd and amour of nearby minions. Additional levels enhances the effect

Bring on the critics! Thank you for your time   v_v  

 

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Reply #1 from Demigod Forums Top

WEll i like the idea dude, but he has no signifigant source of damage AT ALL. I know that is his weakness(he needs a second weakness) but every dg no matter what they are strong at has a primary damage skill, unless that is theyre entire focus. This guy would get almost no kills and i dont really see a focus for him. He has two teleport skills and then two buffs and a kinda useless sumon. Why doe he not get his own minions? Anyways im sorry im first to reply and i seem like an asshole but u did say bring on the critics :)

Reply #2 from Demigod Forums Top

hmm...focus,eh? Solomon, this pacifist guy, he is the kind of demigod who is very good at ganking enemy demigods, overwhelming them with sheer numbers. A melee fighter, beating anyone senseless with his bare hands.

No pure damage per se, but he can potentially trap multiple demigods, denying them access to certain areas and bringing in reinforcements (including ally demigods) for extra POW! Lastly, being able to 'pull' a rook from his tower farm might be handy....

I thought this ability would be too overpowering, hence he has no real damaging skills. Maybe if he is complemented with powerful stats (some suggestion perhaps?), then he'll be a possible contender. Anyway, his minions are more beefed up versions of the usual, just haven't figured the maths yet.

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Reply #3 from Demigod Forums Top

ok so he is a crowd control dg. There we go! At first i did not see his focus, but now i do. He is great at countering and keeping enimies balanced. He can pull back a wounded dg to his side, and then keep them from healing. He would be fun to play as but i still have that same complaint on where his primary source of damage is. Maybe pull can deal some minor damage like 800 at final level? He would get allot of kills actuall this way, and maybe he could have super low base attk damage liek 130 but his speed is obsurd? And if you need a story i got you covered. If you can check out my 3 demigods post. And another weakness of his could be lacks signifigant primary role in battlefield.