Have Faith.

Another Poem from Yours Truly...

December 3, 2004 10:09 PM from

Beauty does this very day conceive,
Tell me why, oh why do you grieve?
Sorrow fills your heart,
I can tell it tears you apart.

I feel your saddness and your pain,
If only I could help the beast be slain.
I see what you endure,
Please let it go, I implore.

You must have faith in life,
Only that will end your strife.
I know it can be hard,
But do not let your heart be barred.

Open up and you can see,
What life offers and what you can be,
For there is good in this world,
All that awaits is for it to be unfurled.

Well, enjoy....

~Zoo

poetry

2,243 views 8 replies

Reply #1 December 5, 2004 3:26 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Aww......Shaun. That's so beautilful!

. hehe. Does this poem have to do with a certain some person I know of?

~carebear~

Reply #2 December 5, 2004 7:01 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Eh, it could....ya never know...

~Zoo

Reply #3 December 5, 2004 8:07 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

That was really good Shuan. You should enter that in a poetry contest.

~Sam

Reply #4 December 5, 2004 8:07 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

That was really good Shuan. You should enter that in a poetry contest.

~Sam

Reply #5 December 6, 2004 8:07 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Yeah, I think I know exactly who it was talking about! hehe. Yeah, Sam's right. You should enter that into a poetry contest!

~carebear~

Reply #6 January 8, 2005 8:18 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

wow. i really respect your talent in the art of poetry, shaun. you may not know who is writting this, but i see you every day and am capable of comminting on this perticular peice of writing. i can honestly say that your poems enthrawl me.

your friend,
annonymous

Reply #7 January 9, 2005 12:16 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Well, thanks...and yes, I know who you are....well, now that you told me....and I thank you for your comment. You do nice work yourself...

~Zoo

Reply #8 October 1, 2005 1:51 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

ah, *sigh*....
its so goregeous Shaun...
its about her, and she was Your dreams then... thats alright, i accept that.
~Liv

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