The marine, now mateless, sunk his spade.
 Shaken by day's flirtation with the reaper's edge
 and aching from Ares' relentless blade
 driving deep into men of war his wedge
 that splits the natural human will to be
 content in touch with God's idyllic yields
 unassociated with ambition's fee
 for dealings incongruent with greening fields.
 
 Pride was the anvil for defoliating tools:
 but an hour ago his digging mate,
 killed in compliance with red-eyed rules,
 was a patriot supreme but used as bait
 cast by Power's enterprising ghouls
 who stock piranha — grimness into glory's creek to devour the innocence of nature's schools,
 despite what common man is keyed to seek.

 Coiled in his soggy home for another quiet night,
 he picks a star, once a foxhole mate, now eternal light.
 
 His eyes squeeze shut; he fears the dawn
 when yawns the thunderous valley of death
 asserting terror by explosive brawn
 as the squad undaunted mid the dying breath
 regains the bloody river bank it lost
 to defenders of home and wretched land,
 pledged to die despite the odds and cost
 for what we once were proud to understand.

Copyright © 2000 from "Impressions" Richard R. Kennedy All rights reserved. Revised: January 6, 2004. 
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This is "real" poetry. Did you experience Vietnam? I know many of those who came back were bitter and angry.
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Thank you ever so much--coming from a pro, I shall value your comment. No, I'm and old timer and was a marine during the battle of Okinawa, so I knew the inner feelings, but fortunately, I had the pride of helping to win a war that truly meant something.
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You were a lucky man--in that. Fighting in any war has its price--but the price for Viet Nam was too high.
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As the memorial gives testimony--over fifty thousand brave Americans making the supreme sacrifice based on lies. Sounds all too familiar, doesn't it? I remember my mother saying, "Thank God, son, you will never have to go to war, since World War I was the war that ended all wars." [Of course, she as indeed so many others, did not pay attention to Hitler's move in the early thirties.]
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stevendedalus- This is a wonderful poem! And I agree with Sherye Hanson about it being real poetry. You are both such good writers!
Have you written more poetry?
And I've been dying to ask, will you be writing a book? Or have you?
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Thanks for this favor. Yes, but all unpublished sitting in WordPerfect files--three novels, collection of short stories and new fairy tales,and a modest collection of verse[hesitate to call it poetry].
If you go to www.angelfire.com/poetry/rrjksr/front.htm You get a sampling.
Thanks again for your faithful support.
 
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Well, this has made my day! First I sign on to a comment from someone in the Peace Corps, then I see this!! I am going to the sampling. Have you sent anything to publishers yet?
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stevendedalus - What a treasure you are. The site is wonderful and I'm going to be spending time thoroughly enjoying reading you!!
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What a treasure, WiseFawn, you are! Did you receive my email reply? I also sent you a copy of my last comment here--I wasn't sure you would return to this kind of buried blog--to make it easier for you to get to the website, but it was returned--good old aol,eh?
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Oh, thank you! I'll check my mail, I am behind today due to a migraine. Yeah, AOL is an experience. I'm looking for a local one.