This is Life

A bit of a downer, this one is...(I wrote this in more of a blank verse way...less rhyming, just trying it out)

What is life?
A dream, as some believe?
A first step to discovering yourself?
Perhaps one of a series?

Whatever life may be it is difficult in its own right.
Rich or poor, big or small,
Something happens to disrupt your peace.
Hardships befall you, travesties await.

Life is fraught with danger,
For it is life with which danger is associated.
Pain, agony, sadness, and fear,
All are symptoms of life,
Yet we hate them so and wish them to dissipate.

Like a flashing bolt of lighting,
You can blink and be gone.
Your corpse remains,
But your soul is gone.

Where is the answer to life?
Does it lie in death?
The only way to know,
Is to draw your last breath.

Wracked with evils and perils great,
Filled with things to send us to death.
What awaits us after we live?
God, Enlightenment, another chance, or do we cease to exist?

Joy and happiness,
What are they?
A small break to keep us sane?
Not enough in this day and age,
To prevent murder, rape, and abuse.

Lend a thought to the pain life gives,
And then think of why anyone truly lives.
Not for the pain and sorrow,
For you could be gone before tomorrow.

Humans look forward to a fleeting moment,
Of peace, happiness, and ecstasy.
People say life is full of trials,
To determine worth for what lay ahead,
Perhaps good feelings are our rewards,
To keep us in the right direction,
And help us to overcome our imperfections.

~Zoo
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Reply #1 Top
Toching in more ways then one....keep em coming

Ns38
Reply #2 Top
Touching in more ways then one....


Oh, what's that supposed to mean?...j/k Thanks, man.

keep em coming


There should be plenty more....

~Zoo

Reply #3 Top
See, if you just loosen up your style a bit, you have the freedom to say what you really feel, not just what ryhmes.

Very good, and I hope to see more of the same.

Beebes
Reply #4 Top
you have the freedom to say what you really feel,


True, but I believe some of my finer talents lie in the art of saying what I feel while rhyming....but I think I will try more poems like this.

~Zoo
Reply #5 Top
I'm with alex, I told you, you don't have to ryhme everything!!! Isn't free verse liberating? Well i mean you stil ryhmed a little, but i guess i can forgive you.
Reply #6 Top
Isn't free verse liberating?


Liberating, yes...but I'm still going to rhyme in some of my poems...It's like a fetish or habit or something....

~Zoo
Reply #7 Top
I like it Shaun.... It's beautiful!

Sam
Reply #8 Top
It's beautiful!


Hmm..interesting thought, I thought it was more of a despairing piece...but I guess I can see beauty in it...

~Zoo
Reply #9 Top
you know what i think.
but i'll say it. again.
IT'S AMAZING!
so much feeling...
and we never do truely know what life is supposed to be like or what meaning its supposed to have until its all over.
we look for comfort, an everlasting comfort. and you know... we may only get that after all the days we spend on this the craziness this world has become.
awesome, great, any positive adjective you can think of! (giggles... not like that though!)

x's and o's till no end,
~Liv