"My prose formatted to look like a poem"?

Alan came up with the title!! Genius I know.

February 1, 2005 5:49 PM from

I want to scream
and shout and
cry out loud.

I want to friends
not have to worry
what you might say

I moved before
and I will do it again

Try once more
and you will
never see my
again

Yes you say
but in a way
you will miss me

Yea right I say
you say you hate me
you say you don’t care
you talk about me
when I am not there

You whisper you’re secret
hoping nobody else hears

Well guess what you assumed wrong
You made an ass you and me

Stop talking and complaining
all it is doing
is spreading the pain

Don’t you care?
if you did
you will know what is our there

But you don’t
cause you can’t see
past the end of you feet

You say you’re fine
but your not
why lie

Lying make you
not trust worthy
Lying ruins
friendship

Why lie
b.c when you do
you are digging your hole
down in to your grave!

The words of the mysterious

Stacey~ Tractor-Chick
Things I wonder !!!

Pretty creepy coming from a spunky, perky, person like me!!

1,241 views 2 replies

Reply #1 February 1, 2005 9:24 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Well, it's alright...a few sentence errors...but I guess you could invoke poetic license here....

~Zoo

Reply #2 February 2, 2005 6:23 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Isn't this the one that you wrote yesterday and had me read at lunch? Anyways....very nice Stacey. I like it a lot. I would post my other one that I wrote on here, but I don't want to get yelled at.

~carebear~

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