Empty

Not an April Fools prank....just a regular old poem....should've made a prank though....oh well...maybe next year.

A void,
Meaningless nothingness,
Where you are submerged.

So lonely here,
In this nowhere.
A speck in infinity,
Where time does not exist,
And you are alone.

No warmth,
No joy,
No pleasure,
No love.

This rising emptiness consumes the soul,
The mind is devoured and dissolved.
No feelings exist,
Except the solemn depression that settles over our lives.

Hollow,
No life, no emotion.
Where has meaning gone?
Why does this void continually grow?
Sucking up our hope, our dreams, our feelings,
Losing ourselves in the endless nothingness that we let consume us.

~Zoo
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I don't feel like logging in. Anyway, this is such a melancholy little poem. It's truthful but sad. I can remember feeling like this, it's a very good poem. Sorry i forgot to remind you to write it, but it looks like you didn't need me to.
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Where do you come up with these poems? they are some of the best I have ever heard.

Ns38
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Where do you come up with these poems? they are some of the best I have ever heard.


Eh...they just come to me once in awhile...

~Zoo
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Shaun, you constantly amaze me. Excellent. I like it very much.

Peace,

Beebes
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you constantly amaze me


Wow...constantly...that's cool.

Excellent. I like it very much.


Well thank you, Al.

~Zoo
Reply #6 Top
wow, this is so wonderful yet so tragic and true.... it hurts to read it, thats what makes it so awesome i believe....

~Liv
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wow, this is so wonderful yet so tragic and true....


I've been told a lot of my poetry is...

it hurts to read it, thats what makes it so awesome i believe....


Perhaps...

Thanks for reading, Liv

~Zoo