My Lonely Garden

Another one of those downer poems...this hit me at midnight so I jotted it down without my glasses...the fun part was deciphering what I scribbled down....Enjoy!

I walk in a beautiful garden,
I look around and see,
The world smiling back at me.

Lord, tell me why,
Why can’t I find one to love me?
What do I need to do?
I trust you’ll get me through,
But how, I shall never know.

I’ve learned and I’ve grown,
Watching the world go by,
Standing here, all alone.
My friends stand beside me,
But it’s just not the same,
Am I the one to blame?

Why?
Why can’t I capture what I seek?
I drift by everyday and every week.
Alone I stand,
It’s not what I planned.

Searching for an answer,
I am on a quest,
To find the one,
Who will love me best.

I will never give up,
I won’t lose hope.
I’ve observed the world,
Through my own scope.

I pray that someone is out there,
Waiting for me as I do her,
A twinkle in her eye,
As she waits for just the right guy.

So lonely I feel right here,
In a garden not of paradise,
But of quiet isolation.
It seems so hard to have faith,
Stuck in a wave of desperation.

A longing feeling,
I need not explain.
Have you any advice,
To ease the pain?

Love can be so bittersweet,
A toiling pain,
Or a pleasurable treat.
I walk alone here,
Perhaps not forever,
As I once feared.

~Zoo
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Reply #1 Top
I'm going to give this a little nudge into the forums before it gets buried in the chaos.

Please, don't hesitate to tell me what you think.....c'mon guys.

~Zoo
Reply #2 Top
This is the time when you shouldnt be looking for the right girl yet. You're just preparing yourself to be the right man for her.
Take your sweet own time zoo. We're on the same boat now
And your poem is beautiful. I can relate with it a lot
Reply #4 Top
And your poem is beautiful. I can relate with it a lot


Thanks.

Someone will help you with your lonely "garden"


Jeffers...will you quit fucking around....I'm going to beat the hell out of you one of these days.

~Zoo
Reply #5 Top
Absolutely beautiful... readin it touches your heart in many ways.

One of the best.

~Shadow
Reply #6 Top
Absolutely beautiful... readin it touches your heart in many ways.


Thank you.

One of the best.


Thanks again.



~Zoo