The spring of green eyes

September 4, 2005 6:24 PM from

Please come out of the
storm, the turbulence
let the world see
your beautiful face.

clouds and rain
are no way
to live life

so, soon,
I pray for you
and

I hope that one day
you get caught up
lost in
the spring of green eyes.

poetry

1,836 views 7 replies

Reply #1 September 4, 2005 6:30 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Oh, that is so sweet, Al.

It's a great poem...

~Zoo

Reply #2 September 4, 2005 6:30 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Thanks Shaun! I'm glad you liked it!

Reply #3 September 4, 2005 7:38 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Very sweet, and this comes from your heart yes?

Reply #4 September 4, 2005 10:17 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Very sweet, and this comes from your heart yes?

Yes, it does. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reply #5 September 6, 2005 4:21 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

ooh... Al's got a crush! hmm, hmm, hmm~ (wondering...)
lol but neways, its a great poem, man!
~Liv

Reply #6 September 6, 2005 2:48 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I like the confidence that your writing is acquiring.

Well done.

Reply #7 September 7, 2005 6:31 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I really like this one. especially the last phrase.. it's cool

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