The new trees grow

September 8, 2005 8:01 PM from

It's so complicated
amazingly beautiful
just to see you
standing together

I have no clue how
you came to be
but fireworks seem dull
when I look at your eyes

Gravity doesn't fail, but
you seem to make
each other fly
amazing really

And however things got this way
the raging forest fire you
started
I wonder if it will burn long enough

to make the new trees grow?

poetry

1,697 views 8 replies

Reply #1 September 8, 2005 8:42 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I enjoyed the read.

Trinitie

Reply #2 September 8, 2005 10:19 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

great poem Al! really love reading your material these days... its so awesome
~Liv

Reply #3 September 8, 2005 10:31 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I enjoyed the read.

Thank you.

Reply #4 September 8, 2005 10:38 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

great poem Al! really love reading your material these days... its so awesome

Awww... thanks Liv!

Reply #5 September 9, 2005 5:39 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Hmm, I'm curious as to what inspired this.....it's very good.

¡Muy Bueno!

~Zoo

Reply #6 September 9, 2005 5:58 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I'm also curious as to what inspired this. VERY good poem, Al! I love it! One of my favorites!!

~Band Girl~

Reply #7 September 10, 2005 10:14 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Hmm, I'm curious as to what inspired this.....it's very good.¡Muy Bueno!~Zoo

Inspired by life, I suppose. Thanks big guy!

Reply #8 September 10, 2005 10:15 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I'm also curious as to what inspired this. VERY good poem, Al! I love it! One of my favorites!!

Awww, thank you!

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