The rain doesn't hate me anymore

from JoeUser Forums
There is no telling
when this storm will
abate
so until then I'll weave
a little story here
and hope to pass the time.

I'll write this
Easy-Mac poetry
stir up the words, add water
perhaps I'll make something amazing

The rain pours down outside
the leaves float
among willow winds

And I am reminded of the tears
I once cried,
and of the pieces of myself
I had to collect

The rain hurt for a long time
the remembering
was as bad as the rebuilding
and the rain hurt
hurt so bad

Someone asked me today why
I was always so happy
I told them
I am happy because
the rain doesn't hate me
anymore.
poetry
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Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
Just for you kiddo!
Siege of Centauri
Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
very nice feel Moskowitz
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
I ditto the very nice sentiment Beebes!
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
Awww....I like this very much, Al...you need to fill me in on what you've been doing lately....

~Zoo
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
Hey Alex, I don't know your email and you don't get on your screen name so I thought I would leave you a quick note here! I love you, I miss you and your smiling face! I tried calling on Sunday..but when ever you get a chance. I'm around!
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
You are talented Alex! You're so awesome with detail, I like that. I even love the idea of rain not hating me anymore or even at all! (insert the DA heart here)
Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
nice one al... i like personification... it's one of my personal favorites!

Capt. over and out!
Reply #9 from JoeUser Forums Top
You are talented Alex! You're so awesome with detail, I like that. I even love the idea of rain not hating me anymore or even at all! (insert the DA heart here)


Stella, you're awesome!
Reply #10 from JoeUser Forums Top
nice one al... i like personification... it's one of my personal favorites!


I'm glad you do! This is one of my favorites too