You're probably right, it is probably what you're thinking about. Thanks for the comment big man!
Death_By_Beebles
Just making sure
I'm going to tell you how I feel, and I know it's not my place but look how far you've dropped: What a shameful fall from grace. You think you know me completely, and I thought I knew your face, I guess we've fallen off the radar, what a shameful fall from grace. The cuts on your arms and legs, mean nothing but
We're all suppose to learn from our mistakes. Unfortunately not everyone does. And you wish they would, but they never do. *sigh*
You have to. You get burned and it stinks. Those are the people you are glad you don't have to deal with ever again.
People make mistakes, I know this to be true It's easy enough to slip into something cold and comfortable then to go out into the heat of day. I've made my mistakes, hell I'm sure I've made your mistakes too but I know I've learned from them and I won't do what I did again. Can you say that? Can you say that you let go whe
well JU is finally up and running....I hope.... this is a good on, a really good one Jeffers
*bump to forums*
Great plans come with great consequences and even greater failures the higher you look towards the heavens, the more likely you're to trip on the clouds. But these plans are made in spite of loss, because of the want to have something to live for, something to look forward to, something to die for. Something worth having.
Hmmm... did you get the poem?
Wow, it seems you've had it worse than I have. Except for today, when I tried to post my poem it deleted it. I didn't save it, so I had to write it again.
Hawks have no clue how to live. They're constantly swooping down and catching, then killing the first thing small enough to sink their talons into, and after they've picked it apart, they're off to do it again. Mice have no clue how to live. Always afraid, always cowering in some corner or a hole wasting their lives just <B
Well that's a plus. I was hoping I wasn't the only one who was getting problems. On the down side, that means probably everyone is having problems. Does that mean JU is going down again?
Looks like the points are acting hinky again. Plus, my reply count is off. Anyone else having these problems? (earlier today I couldn't access my blog, so maybe it's just me)
Looks like this one was a no show. :(
Haha, so you think because this predates us, we have no clue about it? Your whole idea behind this blog is that we, as young individuals, are ignorant of anything you ever had to experience, and/or are ignorant of anything that predates us, even by just a few years. This is utterly false. This is upsetting. I'm going to go put some popcorn in the popper.
I wish you would say the things you feel like saying but puppets don't move on their own, puppets can only do what they've been shown, alas, you won't get the words out till the ending. If you cut the strings that hold you up, then you will fall from your seventh cloud, and land on earth, you can't be proud, of loosing oh so much.
Here's my suggestion...If you'd just look at these people, worn I'm sure you'd notice quickly.This also reconciles the cadence of the last line to your formula. That does sound a lot better. Mind if I edit?
It, would be time. Don't spend your time on hate, spend being referred to in the next line it is a much more valuable currency than that. talking about time as currency, as money to be used and spent It will buy so much more happiness if you It throughout this stanza is time. simply believe it can.
*Bump to forums*
My thoughts and prayers for Dharma and your whole family through this recovery. Beebes
Shout, scream and rage it's easier for you than turning a page It's been this way for an age for a long, long age. And once you're done, I'll be here to turn lights off one by one Ready to shut off the sun for it to wake up again tomorrow, oh blessed tomorrow. I don't see why you want all this pain It's almost l
I was about to say the same thing.
You know I don't mind if you write poetry all the time. That's fine for me. As for this one... shattering is something very easy for lonely people, isn't it? I'm sure we both have that knowledge from the tiny bit of experience we have as young adults. Good work.