[quote] This poem was my little knee-jerk reaction to one in particular but hopefully it will get through to a few. [/quote] Good stuff, mate but it things never get through to the people who need to hear it the most.
Mark, [quote] Maybe it is just a case of great minds thinking alike, mate. [/quote] I hope it's great minds I would hate it for both of us if it was anything less. ;)
Tova, [quote] Maybe that should be our next JUWC challenge. Paint a scene with as few words as possible. [/quote] That sounds like a great idea. I say you should start it.
[quote] They're getting closer to finishing it. Ten years ago the estimates were "Oh, about 2060, 2070 and we'll have her done". Now, they're saying, "We're on track to have the cathedral completed by 2022." [/quote] I remember when they did a story on it during the Summer Olympics there in '92 they said then it would be finish in 80 to 100 years. So 2022 sounds awesome. Good writing, but I can't wait to see it with my own eyes. So yes, I'm jealous of you again. :NOTSURE:<
Mark , [quote] What a twisted tale, mate. And talk about coincidental. I'm actually writing a story about a cook at the moment. Are we connected or what? Awesome job and I love the rhymes. [/quote] Thanks so much, mate. It's funny you mention a connection because there has been
Rose , [quote] Pretty creepy and disturbing, honey...but some really good stuff. [/quote] Thanks, Hon. But when you say, "Pretty creepy and disturbing", you aren't talking about me, are you? :LOL:
Doc , [quote] Really! Great story. Just dont invite me to dinner. [/quote] Thanks, Doc. Don't you remember I'm invited to your house for those RIBEYES. :) Kelly , [quote] This was nasty! Bravo! [/quote] &nbs
Roy , [quote] Whoa, creep -ola dude! [/quote] Thanks, Roy. [quote] Lewis Carroll's The Walrus and the Carpenter [/quote] Not only did I like the poem I like the style he wrote it in. I should try it once. Tova , [quote] I got the whole story and it rhymed. I don't know how people do that..it is beyond my abilities. Good job. [/quote] Thanks. Tova. Just so you know w
That was awesome, Zoo. Great job. I agree with Maso about it being a graphic novel. This one and your other story about Immortality are excellent beginnings.
[quote] What I do know is I think Courtney Love is nasty HOT [/quote] Not "is", Roy. WAS. :)
[quote] Good. This will finance my weekend travel. [/quote] Come the weekend it will be all worth the pain. ;) Welcome back.
[quote] bought some AT&T stock [/quote] Might be a good choice. I was watching 60 Minutes and I think China bought a bunch of the same stock. Good article, Roy. You're a damn good blabber. ;)
Mark, [quote] Now, if I read something through and it flows well, and the grammar and spelling are fine, then I'm happy. [/quote] I do the same thing. I hardly ever edit anything I write. Not because what I first right is that good it's because I'm that lazy . ;) Tova, [quote] Hey, that's cute. I'm so gonna use that in real life. [/quote] I got it from ESPN. :) Roy, [quote] I call her
They have been missing for days, A family disappeared without a clue, The whole town has been fazed, And the police don't know what to do. Do you know how easy it was to excute my plan? <span style="
:D Funny stuff, Doc. A lot of good ones.
[quote] I guess it’s my way of honoring God, you know. [/quote] Exactly. When I'm in a race or contest against anybody I have races within races or contests within contests. For example, if I was in a long distance race my goal would be to better my personal best time. But I also would have a mini race with the closest person ahead of me and as
[quote] Good job. I really like the way you use different writing styles. It keeps your stuff fresh and original, and the story lines always make me think. You have really clever ideas which makes your stuff unpredictable. I LOVE THAT. [/quote] Thanks, Tova. Your kind words mean a lot to me. I just hope they don't give me a swollen head .. and I mean the one on my shoulders. Damn, I'm on a r
[quote] Ok, I'm going out on a limb here...what is a Night Gallery? [/quote] [quote] Never mind I googled it....modern day Twilight Zone? [/quote] Rod Serling did both. I enjoyed both series. It's harder to find Night Gallery , though. [quote] Thanks UDIG..once I am done with my comments here I am heading over to your blog and checking your piece out. Of er, writing I mean. Not your gun. I mean....hahahahahha [/quote]<
Great pics, Roy. I must say you look cool as hell in your shades but the guy in front of you looks crazy as hell. Oh shit .. Wait a minute .. nevermind. ;P
Spring and fall have the best weather. Oh, and if you make ribeyes I promise to bring the alcohol and my appetite. ;) BTW .. What new premium channels do you have?
[quote] PUBLISHABLE! [/quote] I see a book of short stories by you, Roy and Tova. Great job, mate. I loved the ending. That's why you don't burn anything until the body is in the drum, too. ;) [quote] I was kind of thinking this might fit with Roy's 'sad but funny' suggestion. [/quote] Roy, what happened to that? I can't find it. I'm eager to read your entry.
Roy, I love your consistency. You need to be published. I love how you have the lyrics in there. Just like Maso said Fucking Brillant.
[quote] Okay, between you and Roy, I've got some serious work to do to just make the grade. This piece absolutely rocks, Tova. I mean it. If it were a novel, if would be unputdownable. Makes me cringe at the thought of the piece I just put up. Most enjoyable... [/quote] Mark is totally right. The pressure is on to equal your's
[quote] This reads like the prologue to a great science fiction story, mate. I would love to read what happens next. [/quote] I know I'm ready for Part II.
[quote] Porn or Love Scene? [/quote] Whatever you want it to be. We all know you're a talented writer so I say just trust your talent. If you're writing in first person I say keep with that person's character. Be true to the character no matter what Tova thinks. Who cares how it sounds like afterwards if it's well-written and honest.
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