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Loneliness and Independence are only as expensive as a 5-liter box of wine…
Or so I thought.

Or so one would think,
But you’ll sink on this sea I’ve made,
Bounding waves, and deserted islands…without shade.

Loneliness and independence are $7 plus tax…but unavailable on Sundays.

Unavailable in one way,
But you’ll stay awake scanning prime time just to pause,
At the soothing sounds of laugh tracks…and applause.

Loneliness and Independence, homesickness and unlearned lessons,
Are relentless,
And I can’t stress this enough.
Loneliness and Independence, passionless pasts in the present,
Are relentless,
And I can’t repress this enough.

Loneliness and Independence left me penniless and irrelevant…or so I thought.

Or so one would think,
But the chain-link between here and there is rusting,
Wealth I’m acquiring by relearning how to be patient…and trusting.

Loneliness and Independence are seldom guests…but always make themselves at home.

Always make their presence known,
I’ve been shown how to be a good host,
So raise your plastic cup as I prepare my toast.

To Loneliness and Independence for all they give and take,
For all the things they destroy and create,
For all the times I’ve been forced to hesitate.
For all the lies they’ve helped me tell,
For all the ones that weren’t believable and the ones they bought as well,
For all the times my heart swelled…

Now raise up this body.

In the corner,
Stand me upright in the display case,
In perfect order,
Stand me upright and paint a half smile on my blank face.
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so i edited the last part of the poem a bit...but only because these were the things that stood out to me...

"To Loneliness and Independence for all they give and take,
For all the things they destroy and create,
For all the times my heart swelled…
Now raise up this body.
In the corner,
Stand me upright in the display case,
In perfect order,
Stand me upright and paint a half smile on my blank face."

this reminds of times when we have been so worn down by the world or by our emotions that we have nothing left to give. and...i guess i can't adequately express what else i am thinking/feeling....but, it reminds of times when i have felt totally hopeless and how even though it is a painful thing to feel that some new perspectives on life can be found in that place. and...the things that are really important in life will resurface in this place. it reminds me of one of my favorite song lyrics by Jars of Clay..."to rid myself of all but love. to give and die." maybe its just the idealist in me....but it's definitely something i try to strive for. and the simplicity of it is so beautiful. it's a good reminder for me when i do find myself in that place of despair.

anyways....so i think i totally went off on a tangent and took the poem some place it maybe wasnt intended to go....but that's the best part about poetry right...that it speaks to everybody in a different way...

thanks for the reminders, the reflections, the thoughts, the feelings....
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Thanks for the insight Mel. I would really like to edit this one because I think it shows my ADD* too much starting as something silly and ending up trying to portray some genuine revelations. But then again, maybe that's how I always am which really confuses people....start out with a joke and then get all serious while they still think I'm trying to be funny. Regardless, I do like this poem and hope that it will cause me some agony trying to edit it.

(*I do not have diagnosed ADD)