A Poem/Song Sorta Thing

I don't really have good music made for it.....

She's looking for this place,
Yeah, she sees the smile on his face
And she won't turn back
But he's trying to let go
And he won't let go

It's so hard for her to say no
She doesn't want for him to go
But she knows it's for the best
And it's what he wants
She must go by the rules

She spends all her days in dream
Imagining how life is going to be
And maybe she just doesn't see
What's really meant to be

So he kisses her on the hand
And he just doesn't want to
look back again
In fear of what he feels
How he doesn't want to let her go.

Too many times he's held her
hand
Too many times he's looked her
in the eye
Too many times he's held her
close.
Trying to figure out what hurts the most.

Now she's fighting herself
But keeping him so close
And off he goes
Trying to let go

Together they will hold strong
Hoping together they'll last long
Not wanting to let her go.

Too many times he's held her
hand
Too many times he's looked
her in the eye
Too many times he's held her
close.
Trying to figure out what hurts the most.

But he can't
It's all so beautiful to him
And that's why he has to let it go
Knowing that it's never
going anywhere
Understanding life's not always fair.

Too many times he's held her
hand
Too many times he's looked her
in the eye
Too many times he's held her
close
Now it's love that hurts him the most.

Okay.....I'm not the best singer in the world. But I do have a little rhythm going on for it. I guess this really isn't directly based on anything. It has something to do with a dream I had the other night. But one of these days I need to have someone help me write music for it.
Oh, and Piper, do me a favor and don't make fun of me or make any grammar corrections. Because this time I'll rip you a new asshole. Have a nice day!
~carebear~
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I probably could come up with some(music)thing. I just have to know the beat/rhythm you had in mind and if you want the music to fit exactly as you wrote the poem/song sorta thing. Is it alright if some stanzas get mixed around ? Some beats/rhythm are rock n roll, ballads, samba, jazz, disco, funk etc.
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That would be awesome if you could come up with something. I'm not much of a music writer. I can come up with lyrics, but no music. I was thinking maybe something along the lines of punk or emo. If that would work for you. If the stanzas were mixed around, I really don't know how it would sound. It might not make sense.

~carebear~