So I ponder life, and wonder silently to myself, "Is this a system? Do I constantly live in a set of constant rules, constantly controlling every constant in my life??" Do I make my own right? I don't know. Do I fight my own fight? I think so. Does anything I say mean anything at all? I know it does to you. I
Wow, i wish i had a friend who had those words in store for me. It's beautiful. Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me. Peace, Beebes
I know that you are hurting, so bad yet so brave. You can't fool me, I know you. I have known you from the day we met. You can fool everyone else, but I, I can see right through these brick walls of laid down emotion. The tears only overflow when you're drowning in your sorrow. So I hold you in my arms, just hold you.
An excellent poem. You really are quite talented. The point is very well taken. Although we have never done special things, or even ordinary things, that does not make our lives any worse. I, for example, have never hailed a cab. Good work. Peace, Beebes
Screwing up. I've raised it to an artform. I can do that pretty well. Play six different instrumentsRebuild a Porsche engine You have my admira
It's roughly stated, but completly Peter-esque. And while I agree to an extent, I'm going to disagree as well. People should say what they mean, but not at the sake of creative expression. Unfortunately for you, it's also my blog. Which means I decide what to put on it. My poetry is not a jab at anyone, so I don't consider it beating around the bush. I say exactly what I mean. All you have to do is see it. We do what we do. L
Sometimes it feels like I'm part of the old saying, "Jack-of-all-trades, master of none." I can create a decent work of art. I can write an award winning essay, but it's usually 2nd or 3rd place. I can do resonably well with HTML and computer lingo, but I'm no computer wiz. I can argue a common point well to a certain extent. <B
I must say, good show! Welcome to JU and all that jazz. I personally hate urinals, and I'm glad someone else has the same view. I write a little poetry. You can check my stuff out on http://deathbybeebles.joeuser.com Peace, Beebes
Thanks Shaun! Peace, Beebes
Are the quotations from a song? Nope. I am proud to say that this piece of poetry is totally uninspired by any song. Than I would do anything to let you hear me say,
Nice work. I love you too big man. Beebes
Beebles:Lovely Thank you very much! Beebes
If directing life's movie means saying these words, If knowing the truth means I know that I'll hurt, and being here without you means that you'll be ok, Than I would do anything to let you hear me say, "Don't give up the fight. Don't lose hope in me. We'll make it somehow, someway, Just wait and see. Sometimes life
I guess living means learning, and knowing the price. Anything worth anything is worth nothing tonight. Once tried, now trying to make this worth dying, And if we get closer, I don't know what we'll be. This pill is a bitter one, don't tell me I'm lying. when I go down screaming You'll know that it's working.
Good to know then. Sorry about the mix up. And not drooling all over your guy every time you're around him is a good thing. It gets you in a lot less trouble. Peace, Beebes
Wow, I'm surprised you haven't guessed yet. And if I'm guessing right, this would be our very own Tia, back in the low -brass. (Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong. I'm just going by the content of your first poem...) This is the Alex kid over in the trumpet section. I write some poems over on my blog too. Check it out! Beebes
Beautiful, and so so true. I wish I knew Shaun. I wish I knew. Peace, Beebes
Peace, Beebes
So Cheers Gid!
I don't know either. But I like Gideon and his work.
So where does that put me after posting 5 times?
Except I don't really approve of just blogging for points.
Sometime, I should just blog for points.
I mean really. It's great. I should do this.
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
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