Loving it and no need for apologies Bkam [e digicons]:D[/e]
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Yeah me too-very good indeed [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e] [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e]
very cool indeed [e digicons]B)[/e] [e digicons]B)[/e] [e digicons]B)[/e]
Gone the way of so many before it
Excellent excellent Bkam-nice evocation of an alien world here-loving this [e digicons]:D[/e]
Hehehe-sounds good to me Bkam
You can edit any post by hitting the edit tab Then copy text above and paste as a new post in your story mr-hope this helps :-)
Oooh I am loving this-very well written and from the joint perspective of the Yor/Humans: an angle not tried before methinks Keep em coming Bkam-excellent :) :)
Ooh excellent-always good and pleased to read any story told from the Krynn perspective Bertio-good luck with it You have a convert here
August 2232 That spring and summer of 2232 had been all about development, the Terran Alliance was developing
What's it all about?[e digicons]:S[/e] [e digicons]:S[/e] [e digicons]:S[/e]
OMFG-this just gets better and better and better mr Silver [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e] [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e]
This is absolutely gripping stuff Aluroon-superb! I love the way you are combining your thoughts with the actual story itself-more! [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e] [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e] [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e]
Bring it on Neilo [e digicons]:D[/e]
Bring it on this is a really well thought out and researched AAR and has me gripped already where's the popcorn?[e digicons]B)[/e] [e digicons]:D[/e]
That'll do for me Silver[e digicons]:D[/e]
There is a part of me that will always thrill and marvel at the sheer rush of piloting an Advance Interdiction Fighter like the Hornet. Designed by my very good friend Professor Andrew S Sharpe and the geniuses in the Shipbuilders Guild, it was fast-very fast indeed-it was agile, more than a match for the Drengin Super Dom
Thanks Kzinti [e digicons]:blush:[/e]
Hehe-nicely spotted Splitski and here are the answers (or some of them: I don't want to give too much away) Yes it's an inter-species match-something that would have been unusual but not impossible then (see below re DNA) No Terran/Altarian war in this game: I started them as close to us and thats the way it has been ever since with the Altarians providing much in the way of support in our war against the Drengin hehe [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e] Yes it's als
Stop teasing us Neilo lol [e digicons]}:)[/e]
Absolutely not but you know with the new 'Edit' function you can go back and edit any of your previous posts (it used to only allow you to do it for your last one-this is seriously good news for us writers dont you think? [e digicons]:D[/e] ) Just a thought....story is superb though
Excellent-really good to see this story reappear [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e] [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e] One question though and I am not sure you meant to do it but why did you refer to Jacqui Hamilton in the 3rd person in one of your paragraphs and in the 1st person for all the others? It just confused me somewhat.... A great story though-will be following it closely [e digicons]:grin:[/e]
sorry-double post guys [e digicons]8C[/e]
Nice updates General-things are hotting up!! [e digicons]:D[/e]
March 2232 In the event it took us 28 months, so I had not quite been able to make good my promise to the President. It had been a period of unprecedented growth for our Colonies and for Earth during a time