Hehehe excellent fella-am interested in some of those adv techs like Stellar Folding-never seen it myself :p
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Loving the different perspective General-cant wait to see how it all unfolds :CONGRAT:
Am enjoying this Bertio :CONGRAT:
Liking this pal :CONGRAT:
Oops sorry Neilo-just seen the latest chapter-wicked as ever-hope we dont have to wait so long for next one you have quite a fan club growing here Mr :CONGRAT:
Running out of time Neilo my man .... :p
;) ;) Patience my friend patience....
Thanks Magnu-dont worry guys I havent stopped writing I have moved house recently and there is a bit of a delay before my internet's up and running again (writing at mo from hotel whilst on business lol) There will be more..... ;)
Indeed on the BSG front but we'll let [I]you[/I] off Silver as you are such a good story writer lol
Who cares how long it takes this is a cracking good read General :CONGRAT:
Oh great-thanks Garion :D
Mine would have to be the peerless 'Diary of a Terran Soldier' but there are some superb new writers out there at the mo (Neilo, Idunno, Silverbeacher to name but a few)
Deleted? Why? :p
A wicked AAR Bertio-very enjoyable :CONGRAT: what difficulty setting were you on again>?
[B]Chapter 5: The Mathematics of Attrition…… 22 May 2233 Fighter Command Building, Admiralty Complex, Sar Continent, Kryseth[/B] The Admiral’s Aide De Camp, Lieutenant Marpap Po’ was not your typical Drengin: he only stood 6 foot tall for a start-very un-Drengin-like. He was also a thinker; turning weighty matters over and over in his mind before acting upon them: it drove his boss mad but he was highly attuned to the Admiral’s needs and thus was indispensable. He w
[I]Thanks for all the feedback guys-idunno yes indeed Red Flight were victorious but remember there were 5 of them up against 2 Yor Heavies and they lost 2...Bertio you may have noticed that Sgt Turner of the [B]Mystery of the Way [/B]and Flt Lt Turner are cousins-remember Sgt Turner mentioned in Ch2 that he had a cousin flying the Phoenix's. Great to have all the feedback though and thanks Highwater and Yukhar-guess you're enjoying it :CONGRAT: [/I]
Nice one Eidolon-nice evocative battle scenes :)
[I]Arrr great-thanks Eidolon and Kzinti-great to have you on board with this one: Idunno and I were getting lonely lol ;) [/I] [B]Chapter 4: The cutting edge…… Sector 00-19 (Aboard Flt Lt Turner’s Phoenix Mk4 Call sign [I]‘Dath’[/I])[/B] ‘Flt Leader to all call signs copy?’ ‘Flight Leader this is Red 1-copy’ ‘Red 2-copy’ ‘Red 3-copy that’ ‘Red 4-copy’ ‘Roger that all call signs-[I]Mystery of the Way [/I]this i
Hehe excellent Bertio :CONGRAT:
All will be revealed Idunno lol :) Seems you are the only one reading this but 1 fan is better than none eh? :p
Needs must when you come up against a 'brother' race Monkey ;) I think I tried to explain how what was going on was wholly against their creed but strange things happen in times of total war and when your race's very existence is under threat.....
When's the next Chapter General? :)
[B]Consulate Building, Qui-Kryseth City, Kryseth[/B] [img]http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8650/dynamic1514x600oe3.jpg[/img]
[B]Chapter 3: The enemy within…..[/B] [I]2 years earlier Jan 2 2230 Consulate Building, Qui-Kryseth City, Kryseth[/I] The view from the 200th floor of the Krynn seat of government, located on the Qui Peninsular, was spectacular. The glass and metal of its soaring spires afforded panoramic views in all directions for hundreds of miles. These were the corridors of power for the nascent star race, the place where deals were done between the priesthood and the politicia
[I]Great thanks Idunno-feedback appreciated[/I]