Late as well.. Josiah was a Jewish king who was reigning during the time period in which the book of Duteronomy (The book which mentions Moses and Josiah as being men whom "None arose like") was "discovered" and re-written. The addition of their current kings name was added to the book much as towards the ending pages of Duteronomy references to Judah restoring Israel were made, though both Josiah and Judah lived long after the Torah
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Good poem, a couple of things about it. 1. "this poem is not all taht great but i felt i should share it" Introductions to poems are never a good idea, if the poem isn't good, let the reader figure it out for themselves, saying things like "its not good" can only bring other peoples opinions of what you did down. 2. You could use some imagery, imagery spices up a poem, there are a lot of lines in here that aren't very pleasing to the
Not to sound like a wise-ass, but with that definition its a clique, if that helps trinitie...
It's imagery. As a poet i never use literal meanings of anything. Literal meanings are an unfortunate requirement of speech. When i write anything, especially poetry, I feel directly saying what you feel makes it dull. Poetry is like art, it’s not supposed to directly say anything, merely paint a picture that strikes emotion in others. If you can’t see past surreal descriptions of everyday things, you can’t fully appreciate poetry.
First of all, I myself have to an extent done all of these, but number eight put me in stitches… Or did it?
"I look forward to the day when we can all live in peace and harmony, with the necessary killings done anonymously by machines." Wouldn't the people behind creating such machines be as against pacifism as the people now who actually go out and kill others? I think the biggest flaw right now with pacifism is that in order to achieve it, violence or intimidation is needed. How many dedicated pacifists are going to use violence for their cause?
In a world of gray, Beauty is thought to be as rare as a drop of rain landing on your tounge while indoors. But while most thinkers of that sort are concentrating on each drop of rain, carefully monitoring its lifespan before it comes crashing down on the ground, the knowledged appreciate the symphony of rain as a whole. The booming percussion of the thunder, the perfect harmony of a thousand droplets of rain cascading down and melting into the earth. They stare awe-struck as f
"I have always thought people who commit suicide are incredibly weak willed and selfish... and long ago I myself have had suicidal thoughts... " I'm in the same boat as you. Only in my case I’m going through what you view as long ago. And I agree somewhat with what is being said. I do agree that all people should go through life trying to please as many people as they can, but where the line is drawn on the word "can" is important. I'
“Blogs for the average Joe.” Being the sub title of the site and all, it seems a bit off to me how many "average Joe’s" can be so pompous. How can you stumble upon a really well designed, well managed, free blog site and think that your opinion is more important and more logical then anyone else’s here? If you're so smart, why don't you have your own successful blog website? Every post I’ve read here has been flamed, weather it be on opinion or fact, someone always has a more true fact then the
I've posted twice before but it keeps saying i don't have a blog... what's going on?
This is a very well written post. I do believe it's filled with important views and very noble principals. The problem that this unnamed "majority" has with pacifism isn't the instance where a figurative bully appears and an honorable victim takes the small wrath of an imaginative beating, in turn for justice being brought to all those who do wrong. The problem occurs when this bully isn’t affected by any laws you can access, control, or manipulate in any way. The problem also arises when its no
Hey, im new here, just trying to figure out how it all works.