Well since its a party up in here... can I get a beer? I know that Jessica lost some points the other night and I dont know why, but I keep gaining them.... Im going to the top!!! Thomas
I took a small chair that was in a corner and sat it in front of the desk. I sat there and watched him, only flinching as it got hotter and hotter in the room. He began to squirm in the large leather chair, I bet it was indeed hot for him. He was braver than the rest. But now I don’t want to seem like a bad guy or anything, I’m not. I just have my job, granted I
The Short History Of Malatesta “My name is Malatesta De Rimini. We both know this, but my full name is Giovanni Malatesta De Rimini. I am the very soul that was condemned to Hell by Alighieri. I was condemned by him because I slaughtered my brother Paolo and this bitch of a lover Francesca. She deserved it, just as you do now. Paolo didn’t deserve to die, but
There came an echoing knock at the door. A large man sat in a large dark leather chair. He spun around facing the door. His eyes trailed up to the large solid cherry door. “Yes?” He said. The door slowly swung open. A black dress shoe appeared followed by the rest of the man. He shut the door and stood motionless and suddenly reached his shades, removed them and folde
No But this one does. Heeee heeeee HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Bloody fucking blues cheating bitches!!! Fitzgibbon is on my hit list right a long with the rest of those damned blues.... mother fucker
Indeed I will going there soon, if the blooming fucks let me in the country... may just be there on VISA, but no matter... as long as I get to see my babygirl, as you you guys wanting to see what Jessica looks like I laugh at you all there is a picture of her on my site this whole time... under dedications... sometimes I wonder about you intellegent people heheheheh If you want t
Much improvement from the first chapter, the character "William" is take better shape, coming into his own. Nicely done. Thomas
ha ha ha ha ha not funny I will not have you guys drooling over my woman... unless she feels like putting one up thats her choice... but I doubt it will be soon considering she a drop dead gorgeous woman, she would make all other women on this site really jealous so... though I do have some really sexy ones of her in a bikini but I dont think your mommies would let you see those young
Well King your pretty damn entertaining too yourself. I got a groupie!!! \m/ Thomas
hrumph... I do not scream at everything that cant be opened... just 99.9% of it. good articles sis Thomas
Miggie... maybe we should be the ones saying keep your hands were we can see them.... damn that sounds like a song... but what fucking song!! Thomas
It does sound a bit like texas doesnt it mate, no wonder our little mate Jessica here is dateing a texas... and that would be me... and god saw it was good, and stood up in all his mightiness and shouted to the world so as all ear could hear and said.... AND ITS GOOD, HE GONNA SCORE!
For all of you that commented and took the time to read it, I thank you. As for Mark I have a little suprise instore for you, Jessica already knows it, but its just for you mate... as for the whole hitman thing... hell now hes an hassassin (arabic for you guessed it assassin) But look out for the twist and turns people... whne I write I dont tread lightly. Thanks again Thomas
labia.. hell no who pierces thier labias these days its all about the hood bro. I like the little sarcasim in the voice its sexy lol not. yeah I got Tatts. Cool cool. Thomas btw Jessica... you better post the real one soon....
I dont care if its wrong or not... its what I feel And I do believe I have probably read it in what you said. Thomas
Nah not a double yikes man, I just think its funny that she thinks Im brilliant with a guess a few other people on here and I dont think of myself as anything. Just in love. But seriously Im the furtherst thing from a nerd as possible, 10g labrea, 1/2 inch lobes, 12g septum, not to mention 15 tattoos lol... nerd acting maybe, but not nerd looking. POWER TO THE NERD NATION!!! Thomas <img src="../images/smiles/grim.gif" border=0 ALIGN="absmiddle
Okay I said that with as much brutality as a wasp to an ant. I will say this keep writing I want to see the next chapter tomorrow bright and early. And again define your character more. other than that... I will say I like the third sentence, it had some feel to it, try to strive for that in all of them and this will be a really good story. Thomas
Trin... lol, not that is not actually what I look like that is a red neck pic I did for Jessica because I did it one night on cam for her and she nearly pissed herself laughing so I took a pic of it and sent it too her... she has one she will post on here of my later, its what I normally look like. Thomas
Well no offence, but it seems like most of your sentence are clichic... but this is better than not writing anything at all. I would suggest trying to define the character more, then little suttlties. but nonetheless, Keep going you have a ways to go mate, and by the way, my first part of the first chapter is up, read it it might give you some ideas of what I am talking about. Best of luck. Thomas
I looked it in its brown eyes, little ghost of eternities, yet saw nothing. Knew all the worlds history, every single souls history, yet knew nothing. It’s faux hair flat here and there. It was still staring at me. Motionless, but staring nevertheless, the same grin on its face, hidden but visible if examined close enough. Its little brown nose, never moving. Its hand
Okay here we go and yes this is coming from the one and only so you should absolutely no its gonna be lame... so lets get started.... Asshole - (az-hole): Asshole. Thats all I have. Thomas
LMAO... braille edition... hehehehe good one King Ummm for the list... Foreign Language dictionaries... we only get them for the curse words. Magazines... the ones with the perky but covered boobas... we try to imagine them not. damn thisis a hard one... muct think more on it... Thomas
Tis cool King, I can do all kinda shit with hyperlinks and stuff its just I thought I had something completely wrong on my image source even though I didnt, its because of where I was pulling it from. Thomas
Hmmm or so they say. Hey guys Im brilliant... Im also retarded as a railroad spike too
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