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Reply to She Chose Me in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Thank you!

Reply to In the City of the Ancients in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Thank you all for your kind words, and in the good Captain's case, the kind smiley face.

Reply to To This Day in Misc JoeUser Forums

I don't know what to say to this... If he could see it, perhaps he would understand...

She Chose Me in Poetry JoeUser Forums

She made me cry She made me fall, to the side Her beautiful smile, made all the boys go wild and she chose me. I understand good things can't go hand in hand I wish they could But she made sure that they can't and she chose me. It was like feeling whole and right for the first time (maybe only), in my

In the City of the Ancients in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Lost in a marble bound sarcophagus a crumbling fountain, wind parting the lonely tourist couple staggering from the weight of it all lost in the billowing wind and pizzaria dreams I find him, a towering collossus, ready to find his own following. He can not. Instead, he cries cries cyanide tears, bitter black records of time

Reply to The night in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Thanks much Shaun

Reply to The night in Poetry JoeUser Forums

thanks and best regards Buddah.

The night in Poetry JoeUser Forums

The night - If it is a window to a soul I am not quite sure I can see through the blurred lines; and if this port contains my history, your future some random being's path then I stumble with the code I need to understand it with. I am ignorant of the truth of it all. All I can see is a darkness that quenches all

Reply to The Key Already Found in Art JoeUser Forums

Ok, so kind of random first reply but whatever. I seriously think you need to go ahead and scrap this bad boy and try again. You shouldn't have to explain yourself that much with your poetry. Your readers can hopefully put 2 and 2 together. By the way, I like the premise. It's a nice piece, it just needs some work.

Reply to Draw Blood in Poetry JoeUser Forums

It's not blood you need simply a sigh and a tear a memory or a goodbye. Interesting piece.

Reply to Songs of Sunrising in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Thanks

Reply to *crickets chirping* in Just Hanging Out JoeUser Forums

Is it any wonder that no one replies? The last time someone other than me posted was the 17th of October. Not good. Not good at all.

Songs of Sunrising in Poetry JoeUser Forums

I will get up sunrising in the morning to be able to see outside the window itself not an abundant branch lost for little larks. To hold in hand tomorrow and have in heart yesterday to keep in mind today's sunrising when the larks refuse to sing. They sang songs of sunrising but do not anymore sonnets of the

Gloria in Poetry JoeUser Forums

The crying eyes of a gentleman catch tears within my own and I am lost, so lost again and struggle, struggle, struggle to keep the smile turned on. Hymns and gospel songs combat no anger, no sadness and lost memory can not overcome the depths that faith can go I see the gentleman crying his tears well up my

Reply to Make Music in Poetry JoeUser Forums

al~ that's a nice poem but sometimes we just need to have a really long run of rests in the music. Surely you've never stopped loving?

Reply to What has happened????? in Misc JoeUser Forums

LJ is what got someone I know in trouble... of course, any thoughts you make public can get you in trouble. I tend to stay away from that sort of thing and just write my poetry.

Make Music in Poetry JoeUser Forums

If you could sing, sing If you would play, play and if love is in you make music. Because life is an acoustic set whether you like it or not you have to make the music so make the music softly loudly out of tune, on key For what is life without love? Just notes and lines on an unreadable scale one easily di

What is it like to be alone? in Misc JoeUser Forums

My face is warm from the quiet, from the exertion I can't hold everything did you expect me to? An easy trip, fall is such a wonderful season. Say you'll miss me say anything say it and live again. So while I plummet, I see your reaching hands, try to pull me back up, throwing ropes of words of love and condole

Reply to What has happened????? in Misc JoeUser Forums

Really, I'm the only one writing anything anymore.

When Frost comes to mind in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Beauty lasts in places where finders keepers no longer exists because the home-front finders can't decide between honeysuckle or Heineken where the mistakes are made in brush patterns on the floor, boldly disseminating all the hell for all to see where tractors plow fields sown with dreams of glorious anthems based<BR

Reply to outwit, outlast, outplay in Poetry JoeUser Forums

If I put it in quotes, isn't it quoted? Meh, "outwit, outlast, outplay" is copyright Survivor, and whoever came up with it.

Nature hates a vacuum in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Remember that nature hates a vacuum so do something anything before you implode.

Reply to Life's Poetry in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Mmm...too true, too true. Great poem, my friend. Thanks Shaun!

A focus on mentalities in Poetry JoeUser Forums

It's clear to me as I watch this play watch the actors droop across an almost to clean stage It's clear to me as I see them sing and dance and play their worn out songs up and down vocals and chords It's clear to me as the curtains drop that these people, these men and women as good as they may be They do not matter in this play

Life's Poetry in Poetry JoeUser Forums

Progress through the prologue and forward to the meat of the chapters fill yourself up with beautiful words and meaningless phrases Poetry will be your scapegoat Poetry will be your release And you'll write incessantly, only to fail and write more And soon you'll find that the Muse, she is a fickle lady and she gives l