We swing and we dance we wear ourselves out we try to be Spring and all the while sing as hands cover hearts and laughs fill the room and every once in a while I get to see you smile I admit I'm not the best and I doubt I'll ever be but every time I hear you say good night dear I wonder if the best is really jus
Excited, nervous We ran out of conversation and just listened to music and stared out of windows We sang and laughed as friends made fools of themselves as we made fools of ourselves In the middle, on the floor we were the only ones with a Slow dance for a fast song as I held you in my arms and never felt more aliv
It's not letting me edit, so I figure I'll finish the rest of my last statement: Yes.
Yes.
In reality, I believe Rogue got her strength and flight abilities from Marvel Woman; some other nerd back me up on this, I can't remember. Anywho, she didn't have her strength and stuff right away, but it happened pretty early after she was introduced. Although I think they do capture the essence of the X-Men in the movies, it's only the essense. There is such a level of depth in each of the characters that it would take many many movies to ma
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We're out of sync with our times there's a Berlin wall keeping us appart by hours and minutes and if I could bridge this chasm right now I would. I've been told to carry on and spread my only song near and wide, far and long, So this has been a beggars plea I wish they'd see the rest of me and see through all the poetry
Thank you!
Amazing was an understatement I'm still caught in the rain, and I find that I can dance much more freely when I know that I can fall. And we had trashbags for rainstorms but they couldn't protect us the wind blew too hard, and the water flew too low so I'm suddenly wondering how all the sudden I am drenched
The title is thought provoking, as is the entire poem. The last stanza has a lot of weight to it.
Dedicated to Ms 5UP, the frustrator of dreams and the stealer of souls. I'm glad I never got wrapped up in your twisted form of justice. The idea was for me to walk with you backwards I had no desire, no will and you scolded and begged talking like I was and had always been a puppy on a string. People
Ah, so a qualifier would be in order to explain a little better. I think I see what you're saying.This piece can be sort of ambiguous without that knowledge, I admit.
Wow.
The storm last night definitely qualified as extreme. I wanted to convey a sense of fury and anger and ultimate sadness as the Earth killed its own. What kind of understatement would you suggest?
The sky screams and I respond in kind as jagged fist pounds the earth with no sense of ceremony and tears fall the product of the misunderstood, dark and brooding as the trees whisper their voices just loud enough to hear them and wonder what was said I hear flitting of leaf and wings as nervous hearts hide from angry blows<
You're probably right.
I say and say this is my last rhyme but I don't think I listen and every time I hear "You'll never be good." I believe them but I've failed to quit Somedays I wonder if the words I write are the glorified droolings of a hack and I keep on and sometimes I ask myself why but I keep working Someone told me once<BR
People say "Never Forget" like it's some kind of statement of emotion they tell you to never forget what happened to these aging men and women the last of a brilliant race of stars How ironic. Let me tell you sir, I can never forget never forget my grandfather who fought that fight, went deaf for that cause I lost him onl
. Indeed, its worship contains strange practices leading its devotees to worship idols of stone and clay. As a belief, Buddhism is contrary to logic and intelligence. Countries where it has been adopted have mixed it with their own idolatrous ideas, traditions and local customs, joining it with myths and deviant ideas until it ha
Interesting how a person who laments the torture and abuse of Christians would be so quick to strike out at someone with a different faith.
I sometimes wonder what destiny, what fate awaits me Helpless feelings converge into panicked resolutions as mercenary fiends take out the opposition (for whatever price you're willing to pay) Conspiring for the eventual hostile-takeover And it feels like We know that we can't live and die by our terms. We have
I think this is ok, but were you trying too hard to be poetic? I konw you want to provoke emotion. The idea is there, but maybe not the words. Keep working on it, and mind, I'm not trying to be critical, I've just liked some of your other stuff better. I never asked you to like it. It has been a long
First, I'd like to point out that the "?" (also referred to as a question mark) is your friend. He makes sentences that would normally be nonsensical statements into questions. Learn to love him. Secondly, I'd like to point out the fact that the article in question (by Moderateman, I believe) was farce, and therefore was not supposed to be taken literally. I would suggest reading into the article and what the writer is trying to point out (In
I haven't written in a long time. Some of that is do to the ever-increasing workload that I am taking, but mostly because I just haven't had the spark to write. That said, I hope that you read this. I hope that you read it, and you get angry or sad. I hope you read it and feel some emotion. I hope you read it and wonder what I'm trying to say. I hope y
You're quite correct. I didn't think of that when writing this.
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