Chapter 8, part 1 The Face of Death, and Retribution Besides The Trader Emergency Coalition <e
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[quote who="SlothSacks" reply="14" id="2166237"]Whens the next chapter coming? [/quote] prob before monday. most likely sunday, since im busy today, but one never knows.
I heard that the devs were thinking of making a demo....all I know is that I will almost never buy a game without trying it out first. I've been burned too many times ( *@#&^$ *# u steam!!!) to just buy a game without playing it first, even if iv read a bunch about it. so my question...is there a set date or general time frame that the demo might appear in?
[quote who="SlothSacks" reply="12" id="2165666"]they are awesome, but thats sad IronClad said no [/quote] they didnt say no, i didnt ask them. but im assuming itll be no. look at it from their point of view. y waste money into publishing a book wen the fans r getting it free off a forum? both stay happy
[quote who="SlothSacks" reply="9" id="2163864"]thanks i just can't get over how good your stories are (i like BSG) You should really make a book or if you are(you are right?) publish it. It is good. COmparrible to the best-selling Halo books by Joe and Eric [/quote] i am making a book, but not of this story. i couldnt publish this one, thats ironclads decision. wen i said i was making this story as a book, i meant like in bood form wen i write it up
gott giv slothsacks his props. or her. its hard to tell in the picture. well he/she just gav me up 3 on karma! [e digicons]:digichet:[/e] (dont no wat the smiley is, but i like 'im)
[quote who="HiddenMaster" reply="6" id="2163687"]Oh.. . I didn't know you cared. Thanks for implimenting my idea. Wait... thats not the smiley I wanted. Oh well, now I'm thirsty. By the way, brilliant way to impliment my navigation idea. This is a good chapter So what is the next chapter going to be about?
seems like the part where kol becomes a hero will have to wait till the end of chapter 8 or the beginning of chapter 9. next up is zeke.
Chapter 7, part 3 A Legend is Born The Trader Emergency Coalition <span style="font-family
[quote who="Vespucci" reply="1" id="2162042"]Duh, because they're getting doubled teamed. Like any bunch of angry women who claim their exhusbands emotionally abused them long ago, they waited until the dude was getting beat up by some illegal alien carjacker before they jumped in to jab a nail file in his nutsack. [/quote] r we talking from personal experience? this sounds pretty heated.
[quote who="SlothSacks" reply="1" id="2161356"]wow... the stories you are writing are good. But i liked reading about the vasari more. [/quote] well theyll be bak. i mention num'pol almost every part here. he might be in the coming battle, he might not. who knows?
im here! [e digicons]:D[/e] like the new chapter, although to be honest, not as much as previous ones. maybe its just been too long since i read the last part that iv forgotten most of the story. that could be it. but keep on writing! great stuff. EDIT: yeah, looking back on ur previous posts, it was all about the TEC for a while, and then suddenly its back to vasari. it had me confused for a while.
[quote who="Juggernaut10" reply="21" id="2160810"]Didn't Zeke get all deformed? I want to see how everyone reacts to him coming alive again. Alfr'eda? Sounds a little like Alfredo... [/quote] haha yeah, that might be where it came from. a name just pops into my head, and if it works i put it down [e digicons]:grin:[/e]
[quote who="HiddenMaster" reply="22" id="2161002"]This is just a suggestion for future chapters. I think you should make Kol a less experienced. For example, you made it like Kol knew exactly what he was doing. You should make it where only bits and pieces of the jackals memory and skills are in him, where instead of knowing how to fly the fighter, he should have the basic idea of it and understand one thing completely while something else he doesn't understand at all, such as the navigation
so just to keep the post going while i write the end of chapter 7, id like to hear ideas for chapter 8. its going to involve zeke and the former High Coalescence that was shot by Kartente while possessing Zeke's mind. part of her was forever trapped in him, and they together have gone slightly crazy. just to giv u background. i hav part 1 of chapter 8 in my mind, but if you'd like to see Zeke/Alfr'eda (the name of the former High Coalescence) do something, post your idea and if i like it and
[quote who="HiddenMaster" reply="18" id="2151004"]Wow! My avatar looks great!!!!! [/quote] that is indeed freaking awesome.
really? a gun? weird design...
[quote who="Jrla21" reply="16" id="2155683"]Is it right above one empty space and t the left of the other? [/quote] yup [quote who="Vespucci" reply="18" id="2155973"]It's there so you can carry it like a six-pack. [/quote] haha
If you buy it now, you can enjoy the game now, and just get the expansions when they come out like us. trust me, the way these guys do work itll be at least a full year until the last expansion is out. (not that i dont like the work the do [e digicons]:grin:[/e] , but u no how it is). id say buy the game now, and the expansions as they come out.
no like right between the two empty spaces. click on the image to get it in its full size. the edges of the hole are clearly melted. how is that a gun?
iv never noticed this before.......did any of u catch it? on the upper right portion of the progenitor. theres a hole. like it got hit with a cannonball. or high-powered laser. looks pretty cool.
I haven't heard of any money switching hands over having impulse. iv bought several games from here. u pay for the game, it gets downloaded...and u play it.
ok well due to popular demand, i hav revised 7,1 and 7,2 on the whole kol-jackal area. hopefully its a little more subtle but still out there enough for everyone to pick up on it. reduced the egyptian part by a paragraph, and removed the vision kol gets about the body bag. tell me what you think.
[quote who="Juggernaut10" reply="14" id="2149225"]No, it's your story. I also noticed the Kol thing before the edit. I think it was a good balance of subtlety and straightforwardness, but changing it was fine if people didn't catch that. [/quote [quote who="Strangey" reply="11" id="2148368"] Quoting guywhoyoudontno, reply 12 let me no if u didnt catch this, cause i wasnt sure i made it obvious enough. i will change it to ma
[quote who="Sqirelmaster" reply="1" id="2134843"]The thing about mines, is that even though they are phased out, everyone can still see them. the phased out just makes it so they cannot be attacked. Gravity mines are different from normal mines in that instead of damaging the enemy, they slow them down and disable their phase drives for a period of time (not sure how much exactly.) As a result, gravity mines arent used very often...in another post, I proposed that a way to make gra