[quote who="israil" reply="24" id="2213884"]its typically a shooting "gallery" not "galley" [/quote] woops typo thanks for catching that. i think i corrected them all, but if i missed a couple, point them out to me. thatd be great.
phalnax, u should get it published.
[quote who="Phalnax811" reply="20" id="2210615"] i just pretty much trashed wat i had written except for the prologue and started again at chapter 1 because it was going in the complete wrong direction, but... 7 pages now and not as corny as wat i had hurried through earlier was. pretty much sci-fi about this parallel earth and this secret military organization that stops this certain something from getting from there to earth. with all the normal undercurrents and secret schemes, its pr
[quote who="Phalnax811" reply="17" id="2209737"] im actually writing my own book, one that has nothing to do with sins, but i enjoy writing this one as well. Oh that makes more sense then and good for you...so am I....science fiction alternate-Earth type book that I'm writing...134 pages so far...good times. -Phal [/quote]\ i just pretty much trashed wat i had written except for the prologue and started again at chapter 1 because it was going in t
[quote who="Juggernaut10" reply="16" id="2209726"]Well...it just seems too direct. It fits, but for one thing, project names are usually so you can talk about it and not have people know what it is. That just seems too obvious for something that could get them blockaded. It just seemed wierd, hopefully that explained it. [/quote] they were the largest Trader world in the order. plus space makes neighbors far, far away. wat would they need to hide? its not like dignitaries fr
[quote who="Juggernaut10" reply="14" id="2209227"]It definitely is one word, but it's for the better to change it. It seemed a little corny and not fitting to me too. [/quote] wat about it was corny? and how did it not fit? bullseye and elite sharpshooters...i thought it fit. if u can explain ur reasoning, ill take that into account.
[quote who="SlothSacks" reply="9" id="2208753"]the story is still good but the name bullseye sort of bothered me. i didn't like that part much. Oh and personally i don't really think Kol should be so cocky suddenly. [/quote] yeah, i had an issue with that too. i new id change it in the next few days to something i liked more, but i put it up there to finish the section while i got an idea. but now iv changed the ending.
[quote who="Phalnax811" reply="11" id="2209177"]This is funny....change the names/places and use it as your own story/book....not one that is tied to a video game you didn't make...make your own.... You are only being semi-original....break the tie it has to Sins and use it as your own fully original story....my advice/two cents. Take it or leave it, I don't care. No offense... -Phalnax [/quote] im actually writing my own book, one that has
[quote who="Juggernaut10" reply="8" id="2208733"]Nope, still love it. I think it's typically put together into one word: "bullseye". Not sure though. [/quote] [quote who="SlothSacks" reply="9" id="2208753"]the story is still good but the name bullseye sort of bothered me. i didn't like that part much. Oh and personally i don't really think Kol should be so cocky suddenly. [/quote] r we sure on the one word? my spell check moved it to 2 words, but then it t
let me no if u r drifting away from this post. just as a kind of heads up. also, i was a little iffy on bulls eye. not sure if thats how its supposed to be spelled. if anyone knows for sure, i would appreciate being told. this might not be the longest one iv written, but this one took the longest to write. almost 3 days. hope you enjoy.
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[quote who="Zoythrus" reply="6" id="2206453"]The Darkness...explain please [/quote] http://forums.impulsedriven.com/344094/page/2/#replies lost of good ideas there, and i begin with the Darkness on the second page (that link takes u right to it). i kind of mix and change my ideas throughout it. enjoy.
[quote who="Zoythrus" reply="2" id="2206200"]You know guys, im wanting to apologize if it seems like im "tooting my own horn", but no one has ever enjoyed any of my ideas... So please, we need more ideas for this new faction concept. [/quote] not to be nitpicky but there hav been many different posts about faction ideas. iv contributed to a few, so thats also y im not backing this one, i hav my hopes set on another one. [quote who="frostysimon
[quote who="demmalition1" reply="24" id="2202747"]Anyone ever read "Prey" by Michael Crichton? Nanorobotics and it's war applications (along with a good story); it shows how deadly (if not stupid, since the good guys always win) nanites can be if they gained semi-sentience (major sp prob. I know...) and how it would work and multiply to control all. [/quote] good book
news alert to all Sinners fans! i will be getting into some heavy space fights soon (which means in the next 2 or three chapters or so), and i dont want to place it all on the way i direct battles in sins, so if anyone has any replay videos theyd like to send me let me no! now that iv said that, let me clarify. i ONLY want videos that provide a clear, concise image of how you are directing your battles. although, if your sending me a replay, that shouldnt matter. u can still send me short vid
just want to point out, its entrenchment. and yeah, like greyfox said, try it out on the normal version for a little bit, and then when you've got the hang of it buy entrenchment, not just for multiplayer, but for new ship designs and better gameplay.
[quote who="demmalition1" reply="5" id="2198009"]Wall-e and HAL 9000 (for the voices, R2-D2 is overdone), HAL could be the voice of the advisor; "I'm sorry, Dave. You can't buy that yet" [/quote] [e digicons]:D[/e] for HAL 9000! [quote who="Zoythrus" reply="12" id="2200256"]so you mean that one of the sounds of the capitals could be the wierd beeping noises you get when you use dial-up? (it'd be kinda cool.) [/quote] also
maybe not. if only the first stage was researched.
[quote who="HiddenMaster" reply="3" id="2195279"]Well, Guywhoyoudontno, I have to admit this was a pretty good chapter, and you captured the way the vassari leader paniced when faced with something completely new. So, you have redeemed yourself with this chapter. Congratulations. By the way, are you going to have any more vassari-advent encounters on here? I mean, they don't seem to encounter each other very much and it would be an epic battle for the, to fight each other. And especially to s
u said the enemy was a tec fleet? so the starbase was tec? maybe they used the last resort protocol (that may not be the right name, my mind is blanking at midnight)
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i for one dont think the ogrov and advent one (forget its name) need another weapon. if they got a ship-to-ship weapon, undoubtedly their structure-ass whooping weapon's power would be decreased (i dont no how much, but i think it would obviously be decreased to account for the fact that it has a new gun). all in all, if u want to fight with the ogrov, tough luck. pick another ship. there are plenty of them. wen an ogrov enters an enemy grav well, just make sure to set them up with all the bu
ALSO novel update: Sinners is currently... 116 pages 3,926 lines 33,211 words (woo!!!) and 192,980 characters ([e digicons]:omg:[/e] ) thank u all for providing continued support and inspiration so this SOASE story doesn't wind down and die out like many of the others! Go Sinners!
EDIT: notice to everyone who just clicks on last page when they see theres a new comment (like me) and they just got here. i posted a new part on the last page. read that first before reading this! there r spoilers. if u want a glossary for the vasari words i used, let me know, but i purposefully wrote them in so you wouldn't have to have an exact definition for them, you should be able to figure out the general concept of what they mean from the words arou
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[quote who="Juggernaut10" reply="21" id="2192850"]Futuristic guns? Maybe different ammo enables an automatic fire mode for pistols, or the rounds were fragmentation ordnance. I kind of bristled at the part where it had a specific button for releasing all of the air except for in the bridge. It's as if they designed it to be taken over by one person. maybe he could find a button to lock the bridge doors, and then some kind of emergency open button for all un-locked doors. It seems a