AdmiralMaximus

AdmiralMaximus

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Earth Sol System Capital world of the Federation Capital city of New Johanesburgh The Navy shuttle landed flawlessly on the landing pad reserved for it. On the side of the sleek craft was written in bold black letters TFS Menlaus. The sky was dark as heavy rain poured down all over the city. The clouds had gathered as if sensing the tense and stormy atmosphere that had been so prevalent this past week in the capital. The side door of the shutt

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Initially, AARs, or after action reports, were really just that; a report on a game that someone had played complete with pictures and/or maps. Eventually this grew into people building up fiction around their games. For most games this works out rather well, but beware, starting an aar and seeing through to its complete end is more work than you may think. Often a writer is torn on waht to include and what to leave out of the story. one doesn't want to make the story dull and boring and at t

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mambaman: if you'll recall correctly, at the beggining of the AAR Nolan was desperately trying to escape an unknown power. What I wanted to do is take us moments before his flight to understand what it was exactly that had frightened him so. I took this moment to be the best because in the game the Korath did in fact declare war on the Altarians thus bringing them into the game and making it impossible for me to ignore them. The next post will go a bit deeper into the war currently be

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TEN MONTHS AGO Uncharted Space TFS Quebec Captain Nolan commanding "What you're saying is that I have to come with you. This whole talk of esteemed guests is really just the political rabble you and I think it is." Nolan stood closer to the Emissary. he could hear the faint buzzing of his personal guards' body shields. He was amazed at the technology. Would they be able to stop bullets? Is that why he had only come with two guards, and the whole

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Thanks! It's good to see some of my readers return to my aar and continue to comment. I know i let you guys down by disappearing for a while so I mean to make up for it. Hope you continue to like it. I'm at a crucial part of the game and story right now where things will start to unfold rather quickly. cheers

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Ten months ago Uncharted Space TFS Quebec Captain Nolan commanding The image of Primero Xavier Corrin's face filled the flatviewer on the bridge. It was him but it wasn't him at the same time. His face had changed. It was somewhat paler than any regular shade of facial colour might be, and the eyes were a deep, blueish gray. With those eyes he pierced Sebastien's gaze. He let a low laugh rumble through the commline. "The Guild... My boy i

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Ten months ago Uncharted Space TFS Quebec Captain Nolan commanding The atmosphere on the bridge was lax. The state of decorum that existed on every Navy ship had somewhat ceased to exist. Sebastien had long ago allowed for minor "dress code violations" aboard his ship. He sat in his captain's chair his head tipped into his right hand half propping it up and his left hand drumming fingers on his armchair. His sensor officer had his earphones on an

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Low Orbit above Calisto Missile Frigate TFS Inflexible Navy weapons test & research Restricted Area "Arriving at target destination, holding pattern locked in Captain" "Bring her about 6 degrees to starboard, make sure the brass get a good look at her." replied the captain. "Targeting systems are online we're ready for the drones sir." replied the weapons officer. The captain nodded an affirmation and keyed in the comm

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lol I like the constructive criticism mambaman I think i sort of threw it together as best I could to get back into the story. I also wrote it before actually playing the game which I hadn't actually done since July. Now I got a good hour's play in so it was much easier to write this next one. I hope it meets your standards! cheers and sincere thanks it's the reader's responses that make an AAR wrote writing (that and the fun of writing it of course).

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The aftermath of the debacle at the United Planets Assembly sent shock waves throughout the entire galaxy. The Socialist Republic of Drengia protested loudly and exclaimed that the People of the Republic should not expect stability from the traditional galactic power of the Terran Federation. N-6 had caused substantial damage by crash landing in the middle of the assembly dome. There had been loss of life and the leaders of the Republic had not taken kindly to it. Helios was a

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Meanwhile Imperial World of Vi'reshk Nolan strode through the beautiful gardens. Many of the plants were indigenous to this wonderful and he did not know the names of many of the exotic flowers in neat order, or any of the colorful vines growing up the sides of large trees. he had been here for a few weeks now. He was well rested and his crew had were being well treated. His body still ached at times from the punishing interrogation he had survived in the Korath

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Good Citizens of AARland of Glaciv2 and fans of The Story of Mankind After a long (too long) hiatus, I proudly announce that I ma working on an update for this aar which I plan on reviving. The sudden plot twists must be answered concretely. In a week or so I will have an update posted and this AAR will regain its former glory. This AAR is most certainly not dead (well not anymore!) che

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MY bad QRTXIAN your math is correct according to the post you read. I edited it once I saw my mistake but since the post already contained multiple edits i decided to try and keep it on the dl. Just so there's no mistake 8 years for the game of FTA"From the Ashes" which began in 2227 and ended in 2235 5 years between FTA and AAE 5 current years in AAE 18 years total. My bad for the error will post EDIT for every one I do fro

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Rest assured all questions will be answered before the end of the AAR. In terms of time, this story begins at least five years after "From the Ashes". That AAR lasted approximately eight years with the last two being the Drengin War and the fall of the first Drengin Empire headed by Torlek Kona. As of now it has been five years since "Ascension and Evolution" started, the Terrans are in a precarious position. [URL=http://img810.imageshack.us/i/quarterlyreport.png/][IMG

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[quote who="Maiden666" reply="84" id="2645757"] On a side note. The title of Oberkommander comes for the German OKW (Ober Kommando der Wermacht" in WWII. I thought this was fitting for a man like Klaus Muckler. The correct german word for his rank would be "Oberkommandant", just FYI. [/quote] Thanks for the clarification, though I was not attempting an actual translation. Come to think of it that sounds cooler anyway. [e digicons]:thumbsup:[/e] &nbsp

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Two Months Later Bi-annual United Planets Assembly Planet Ares The large oval room was filled with Diplomats, Ambassadors, Skikdas, Commissars, Chairmans, Governors, Generals, Governor-Generals, Admirals, Paiges, and Squires. This was the United Planets Council. Meeting once every two years this congregation of state officials debated and decided many important things pertaining to the entire galaxy. The traditi

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