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Poor grammar is a distraction in Offworld Feedback Offworld Forums

Whoever is responsible for editing/approving the text needs to be double-checked. I saw "SHAPE MARS' FATE" but should be "SHAPE MARS'S FATE" I saw "We know you are anxious to get the give-away..." but should be "We know you are eager to get the give-away..." I saw "...jet fuel is quite flammable." but should be "...jet fuel is quite inflammable." Just to name a few.