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Chapter 4: Planetfall Oxana awoke with a start. She felt cold, weary and a little disorientated as the cryopod disengaged. She stepped out of the pod and reached for her cheek plates. They contained all the information for the upkeeping mission as promised. The target was the planet Lacaille II. She would be inserted by orbital drop pod to secure and defend a landing site for the transport ship near the capital city. Enemy forces and infrastruc
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Sorry if that jarred mambaman. I am aware that military training is typically much longer. I was trying to convey how little the Korx government values its slave soldiers. It is essentially treating its slave soldiers as cannon fodder, and that is reflected by the training course: A quick toughening up on a high gravity world, a bit of weapons training and a bit of combat practice, and then off to battle. Compared to some ancient armies this is actually high
Chapter 3: Boot camp Oxana soon discovered that she was to be trained as a marine grunt. The boot camp on Koronor II was one of the Korx military’s main training sites. Koronor II was a high gravity world, deemed particularly suited to military training. The idea was that the high gravity would toughen up the recruits, making their muscles work harder than they would have to on a world with more normal gravity. Thus once deployed onto wor
Certainly, they're all good games. As for Renegade I suppose it depends on how much you like FPS games. I'm not the biggest fan of the genre myself. You may actually enjoy Renegade, but I personally didn't think it was up to the same standard as the other games.
I really enjoyed the Red Alert series, especially Yuri's Revenge. Generals was a very good game as well. Some effort was made to differentiate the three sides a bit more than in previous games in the series. Maybe not the best place to start though, as Luckmann pointed out the graphics of the earlier games will bug you, especially if you start off with the 3D spinnable graphics of Generals. Oh and don't bother with Renegade, it's a mediocre second rate FPS.
Chapter 2: The High Court The investigation moved swiftly. A lowly officer involved with the freighter scheduling was implicated as the traitor linked to the pirates. He was quickly tried and sentenced. The judge had devised a particularly cruel fate for this individual. The traitor was sold for virtually nothing (a great insult to the traitor in itself) to the Korath Clan. The only condition of sale was that
I've decided to try and emulate some of the other fine authors here and produce a longer story, more like some of the other epics on this board. I shall try to keep the chapters coming at reasonable speed. As ever comments, suggestions and criticisms are very welcome. Enjoy. *********************************************************************************************** Chapter 1: The Spirit of Capitalism <p cl
To war indeed. Thats a very well planned invasion you have laid out there. Lets hope you can pull it off without too many hiccups. Make sure you guard those Terror Stars well too, the Torians will be gunning for them. Great update!
".... also this could be misused to destroy planets and "remove them from the game", for example during extended wars." It is very satisfying to destroy a particuarly tenacious enemies homeworld. And pre-Terror stars this was the only way to do it.
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Glad you enjoyed it mamabaman. I shall write another AAR sometime soon, so any ideas or suggestions for my next story are very welcome. The Game behind the story: This AAR is loosely based on one of my first games with the Twilight of the Arnor expansion pack, and it was also the first game in which I gave the Korath a serious go. The settings (as best I remember them) were a large galaxy, with abundant, scattered stars, but rare h
Chapter 6: Consequences And so I march in line to my doom. Around me walk all of my siblings, an endless line of faces that look like mine. All of us condemned. All because of me. My act of rebellion has made my entire clone line suspect. I can only hope that my actions paid off, that the Korath’s enemies received my message. I can only hope that my siblings can understand why I did what I did, and coul
You may consider me a fan also. And really, don't worry about the wordiness. You write very well Muuurgh, so the wordiness only provides more excellent story for your readers.
This game looks like it'll be awesome judging by the trailer and the previous two Knights of the Old Republic games. The Sith Lords broke Drath Bane's Rule of Two. So when is this time line? The Knights of the Old Republic games were set around 4000 years before the original film trilogy. Darth Bane's Rule of Two was only implemented after the Sith got badly beaten around 1000 years before the o
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An interesting story Muuurgh. You've choosen an unusual angle to tell the story from. Will be interested to see how this develops. Keep up the good work!
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My post was not meant to offend Decim8tor. It is a joke, not a serious attack on Christianity. Indeed anyone who knows enough about Christianity to get the punchline can (hopefully) see that. I find your use of the phrase "judge not lest you be judged" somewhat ironic, since you yourself are condemning what you consider to be blasphemous posts. My apologies if you are offended, but we live in a society with free speach.
Chapter 5: Defiance Back in the slaveling barracks my mind was racing. What could I do to avert what was happening here? I lay on my sleeping rack staring up at the ceiling. There were few options. I was physically weak. The only way I might take out a Korath soldier was if he obligingly stood in an airlock whilst I keyed the exterior door open. So any kind of direct action was out of the question. </p
Gotta say mambaman this very good. I like the fusion of game description and narrative as well. A sterling effort. I shall await the next installment with baited breath.